Haha, I like her response to the people who thinks she has a painful past XD Thats so much more interesting than her moping around!
Also yay, independent islands <3 I'm a sucker for stories that don't have just like one massive 'land' or kingdom or whatever (or two, for the sake of some giant war).
One thing that bugs me a little about the drawing is that her torso is very flat, I'd suggest maybe rounding out the area right under the boobs (ribcage) and at the hips (pelvis). Her arm is in the way of course but that would suggest some more curvature to her spine. Sorry if those are unwanted crits ;__;
Thank you so much! I wanted to steer her character away from the typical angsty, tragic past type. Though she definitely has an unfortunate history, she deals with it in an out-of-the-ordinary way.
And not at all :D. I've always struggled with getting anatomy right, so it's great to get a critique from someone who knows what they're talking about. I could definitely make some edits to this pic.
Thanks again! I can't properly articulate how great it is to receive some feedback on this thing :).
Not a problem, reading and seeing these is such a treat... I really think this journal could use more viewers, is it ok if I plug it in my next sketchpost? Or are you trying to keep this on the down low XD
Really? I would be extremely grateful/speechless if you did.
I was mostly doing this to help motivate myself to keep working on it, and didn't really expect anyone to follow along -- let alone my favorite artist -- but possible feedback/critiques from more people would definitely add to the motivation :D.
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Also yay, independent islands <3 I'm a sucker for stories that don't have just like one massive 'land' or kingdom or whatever (or two, for the sake of some giant war).
One thing that bugs me a little about the drawing is that her torso is very flat, I'd suggest maybe rounding out the area right under the boobs (ribcage) and at the hips (pelvis). Her arm is in the way of course but that would suggest some more curvature to her spine. Sorry if those are unwanted crits ;__;
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And not at all :D. I've always struggled with getting anatomy right, so it's great to get a critique from someone who knows what they're talking about. I could definitely make some edits to this pic.
Thanks again! I can't properly articulate how great it is to receive some feedback on this thing :).
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Really? I would be extremely grateful/speechless if you did.
I was mostly doing this to help motivate myself to keep working on it, and didn't really expect anyone to follow along -- let alone my favorite artist -- but possible feedback/critiques from more people would definitely add to the motivation :D.
Thank you so much!
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