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The Night Descending

Apr 20, 2010 16:58

Title: The Night Descending
Author tokenblkgirl
Fandom: The Vampire Diaries
Characters/Pairing: Damon/dark!Bonnie
Rating: R
Words 1,072
Warnings: Spoilers for episode 1X14, “Fool Me Once.” Violence, mentions of bloodplay, mild sexual content
Prompt: Written for dark_fest. Prompt: Any fandom, any characters, I want to hurt you just to hear you screaming my name
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tokenblkgirl, character: bonnie bennett, television: the vampire diaries, pairing: damon/bonnie, character: damon salvatore

Comments 35

isisgodiva April 22 2010, 11:50:02 UTC

Wow...this is deliciously dark. I loved it! I just love the way you write this pair in general and I always get excited whenever you post something.

Now... if only we could get you to start a multi-chapter story. I'd be in heaven :) Beautiful piece! :)

tokenblkgirl April 22 2010, 21:11:04 UTC

*hugs* Thank you so much! I've been missing Bonnie on the show, so writing this was a little therapeutic. :)

It's been a few years since I wrote a ff multi-chapter, I'm not sure if I know how anymore, LOL. But I'd definitely like to do a big bang challenge for the show at some point, I just need to clear off some of the WIP I've got going first. Hopefully soon. :)

rebeldesigns April 25 2010, 07:14:22 UTC

I am speechless, as usual. Wonderfully dark, perfectly captured... yeah. Can't find the words at the moment, but this was brilliant.

And I'm with the other reviewers here... we need some multi-chapters of this pairing from you! :)

tokenblkgirl April 26 2010, 03:59:50 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this story, I'd like to do something longer for them at some point, hopefully that'll happen sooner than later. :)

meiou_set May 2 2010, 13:53:13 UTC

How did I miss this! It's glorious! *fangirls*

tokenblkgirl May 7 2010, 16:25:27 UTC

:D Thank you! *hugs*

razycrandomgirl May 9 2010, 06:39:49 UTC

grrrrr! You need to stop this before my body explodes.

You almost killed me with this:

Their dance is slow, all writhing hips and roaming hands as the space between them closes. He lifts the edge of her skirt, but she shoves it down, glares at him. Damon grins, “You’re adorable,” and lifts it again, pushes his thigh against her crotch to hold it in place. A tighter grip and some strategic rubbing and she’s into it again.

tokenblkgirl May 9 2010, 13:38:15 UTC

:D :D :D I do what I can.

I have no real interest in Damon beyond oversexed killer at this point. He's more fun this way. :)

razycrandomgirl May 9 2010, 16:07:13 UTC

I agree. Him in puppy love mode is not my thing.

Though there should be love spells and abuse of power and Damon being the victim for once. Cause that's amusing.

I love Bonnie's face in your icon.

etgoddess May 26 2010, 04:45:48 UTC

THIS. Hot and dark and fantastic. We need more of this next season. Amazing job! I love seeing Damon put in his place by his little witch.

More please!

tokenblkgirl May 27 2010, 00:27:14 UTC

Thank you so much! :D :D :D