Two Guys in the Woods

Apr 12, 2010 15:37

Title: Two Guys in the Woods
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Chong, Lily, Moku
Word Count: ~1,500, complete
Summary: Chong and Moku tell Lily about meeting two strange guys in the woods.
Notes: Written for story_lottery, prompt 'meadow.' This is 100% silliness.

Two Guys in the Woods )

character: chong, fic: two guys in the woods, story lottery, writing, challenge fic, avatar: the last airbender

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yukinoomoni April 13 2010, 17:03:06 UTC
I think I love this too hard.

Poor Zuko. Oh man that would be awesome to see.

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blue_lacquer April 14 2010, 02:11:01 UTC
Thanks! And Chong thought Sokka was irritable and uptight. ;)

I tried writing this out with all the characters meeting in real-time, and I really didn't like the way it came out, so I decided to go with the stoner recap.

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aerodactylus April 23 2010, 22:37:44 UTC
Omigod, this could not possibly have been any more spot-on. I could HEAR Chong telling this story, right down to the classic stoned inflection on his words. And the Zuko impressions were so funny. Great job!

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blue_lacquer April 24 2010, 01:44:08 UTC
Thank you! I wish I could draw well enough to do a comic for this one. Chong was totally making hilarious faces in my head. ;)

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somniumweb May 24 2010, 05:31:54 UTC
I liked the little bits of Lily/Chong love in the beginning and the rest was so fun to read. This would totally be how Chong would recap a meeting with Iroh and Zuko.

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blue_lacquer May 24 2010, 22:17:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Zuko and Iroh would definitely leave a lasting impression on anyone they met at that point in their travels. ;)

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amanda_violet April 1 2011, 22:09:30 UTC
This is my faaaaavorite.

Of course it's no surprise that stoned hippies + intense Zuko makes for wonderful comedy. It was funny enough with Sokka, now I'm just imagining Zuko running across them...

Also this: "What was that about? We're nomads. And you live in a cave, dude. You can't talk." That was incredible.

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blue_lacquer April 2 2011, 00:27:02 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

I usually prefer not to write things as characters telling a story, but in this case having Chong be the narrator worked out better than writing it as direct action.

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