The Lagoon Room

Mar 31, 2010 12:50

Title: The Lagoon Room
Rating: PG
Characters: Mai, minor Fire Nation OCs Pairing(s): Mai/Zuko
Summary: Mai uses a rumor in the Fire Nation court to her advantage.
Word Count: ~1,900, complete
Notes: Written for story_lottery, prompt 'lagoon.' This is a tongue-in-cheek look at post-series Fire Nation political intrigue.

The Lagoon Room )

character: mai, story lottery, writing, fic: lagoon room-the, challenge fic, pairing: mai/zuko, avatar: the last airbender

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yukinoomoni March 31 2010, 18:47:18 UTC
Eeee, I liked the surprise of Ursa kicking ass with Dao swords. VERY nice.

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blue_lacquer April 1 2010, 14:51:13 UTC
Thanks! I imagine she's thinking, "Get back here damn it I'm a swordswoman not a sprinter."

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blue_lacquer April 1 2010, 15:14:46 UTC
Thank you! It's kind of Dangerous Ladies Redux: Now Fighting for the Light Side of the Force. ;)

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tulleskirt May 6 2010, 20:39:50 UTC
Awesome! Very clever and totally believable snapshot of life postwar. I can totally see Mai relishing something like this. :D

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blue_lacquer May 7 2010, 01:16:16 UTC
Thank you!

Ferreting out people plotting to kill Zuko is a nice change from all those boring Fire Lady ceremonial duties. And she gets to hang out with Ty Lee. It's win-win. ;)

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jill_rg May 7 2010, 03:22:21 UTC
I cannot express how much I enjoyed this! I mean it.

My favorite line, which sounds exactly like something Mai would say is, "And leave the only part that wasn't boring to someone else?"

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blue_lacquer May 7 2010, 15:18:37 UTC
Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

Poor Mai, having to sit and listen to all these boring guys talk before she gets something to do. ;)

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fadedelegance May 7 2010, 05:29:36 UTC
Mai, Ty Lee, and Ursa POWER! :-)

That was really cool. I agree that Ursa has some kind of ability up her sleeve that we were never told about. (And that she's not dead. C-: )

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blue_lacquer May 7 2010, 14:48:58 UTC
Thanks!

I've seen swordfighting Ursa in several different places, so I cannot claim credit for the idea, but I do like it.

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