Comments | blue_fjords: Red Is My Colour Prompt for Day Thirteen (Part Three)

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Red Is My Colour Prompt for Day Thirteen (Part Three) - corrected

Jan 14, 2009 17:47

Ms. Bristow turned to him as Mr. Vaughn crossed to the fallen right wardrobe, tugged out its bar, and helped Dr. Charles out. “So. Leslie. You have five minutes to convince us not to use one of these on you. Start talking.”

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In the end, they decided to leave him there. Leslie, or Santa, or X’Fibrililoo was banished from roaming and ( Read more... )

tw: ianto, tw: suzie, tw: jack, tw: owen, red is my colour, tw: jack/ianto, tw: tosh, tw: team, fic, torchwood

Comments 26

fide_et_spe January 16 2009, 21:08:49 UTC

This is great fun, and I loved the little forshadowing moments with Jack and Ianto. Really liked your OC.

blue_fjords January 17 2009, 00:44:53 UTC

Thanks! I hadn't written a sympathetic alien yet. I'm glad you liked him!

tiggerbrasilf January 24 2009, 17:53:57 UTC

*giggles* that was fun. Nice when aliens can live normally in the world, even if they have enemies (:

blue_fjords January 24 2009, 20:40:19 UTC

Thanks! I usually have the aliens as the antagonists, but I liked Leslie so I think I will try to write some nicer aliens in the future.

thrace_adams February 3 2009, 05:32:27 UTC

This was really brilliant. I loved the plottiness and the OC was really enjoyable. Great job. I'll be working my way through your masterlist over the next couple of weeks so I'll be seeing you :)

blue_fjords February 3 2009, 13:18:19 UTC

Welcome! :) Thanks for the comments. I hope you enjoy the others!

wynkat1313 September 11 2009, 23:25:11 UTC

ROLF! Wonderful fun! so many lovely little bits sprinkled through out. Just the kind of story I needed today. yum

blue_fjords September 12 2009, 16:45:37 UTC

I'm glad it was cheery for you! (And I love your icon!)

oneangstychick November 9 2009, 15:02:43 UTC

This was such a fun and silly romp. It's wonderful to read something so upliftingly Torchwood.