FIC: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 4/10)

[blue_fjords]

Title: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 4/10)
Author: blue_fjordsRating: PG-13

Comments

[idamus]

Wow :-)

[blue_fjords]

Thank you!

[blaid_drwg]

OMG I thought Ianto was getting shot there!

[blue_fjords]

Not sweet Ianto! Let's keep him safe, shall we? At least physically. Angst is a different matter entirely!

[fide_et_spe]

That was very exciting, this is fun, although not for poor old Kathy getting shot in the neck.

Also the most appropriate use of the number 456. Perhaps it can be like room 101.

[blue_fjords]

Yeah, poor Kathy. Let's all stand over her hospital bed!

Hey, do y'all say drool or do you say saliva? Like when you're asleep, and your mouth is open... this is a v. important question! Do not laugh!

[fide_et_spe]

It's very serious indeed. We would say that we drooled, and call the actual stuff saliva, but in the sleeping with mouth open context, it is drooling.

[blue_fjords]

Huh. So would that be a strand of saliva, or can drool be used as a noun here? As in "there was a puddle of drool on the pillow" (this is not for the crime novel fic, btw -- I think this thing shall be decidedly drool-free).

[alba17]

Excellent! Great action description in the last part - very suspenseful.

[blue_fjords]

Score, that's what I was going for! :)

[thrace_adams]

Oh my goodness! DI Swanson was shot!!! GAH!!!! Excellent chapter...I think I might have been holding my breath while I was reading it!

[blue_fjords]

Yay, that's the reaction I was aiming for! You'll be able to catch your breath in the next one, I think.