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FIC: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 2/10)

Sep 09, 2009 19:22

Title: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 2/10)
Author: blue_fjordsRating: PG-13 ( Read more... )

tw: ianto, tw: suzie, tw: jack, tw: gwen, tw: owen, au, tw: tosh, tw: kathy swanson, tw: rhys, tw: andy, fic

Comments 37

wynkat1313 September 9 2009, 23:59:06 UTC

mmmm. yummy. I love all the little details that show us the character so well. Nicely done.

blue_fjords September 10 2009, 02:29:12 UTC

Thank you! I love detail work, myself!

alba17 September 10 2009, 00:10:16 UTC

Oooh. Very intriguing. I really like the Jack segments.

blue_fjords September 10 2009, 02:27:41 UTC

I was going to do one Gwen post, then one Jack post, back and forth like that, but I didn't want one or the other of the characters to get the shaft, so decided to combine them. B/c some people are Gwen!yay and some are Jack!yay and hopefully this way there's a little yay for everyone.

used_songs September 10 2009, 00:38:03 UTC

This is in black and white with lots of sexy shadows, right?

Love Gwen and Rhys - especially the way he looks at her like she can do anything. And of course I can't wait to see what Jack and Ianto get up to.

blue_fjords September 10 2009, 02:25:32 UTC

I do rather adore the Gwen/Rhys relationship dynamic, and there won't be oodles of Rhys in this, but I like for his presence to be felt.

All shadows are sexy, baby!

electro_club September 10 2009, 01:44:44 UTC

I so like where you're going with this. Suzy is that kind of nutjob. I see a certain Noir thing about this, even though I'm not sure there is.

Do you have a posting schedule? Like, one chapter every day or every two days or so? Or are you just posting as you go?

blue_fjords September 10 2009, 02:22:55 UTC

Well, it's a serialized crime novel, so hopefully there's an element of noir to it, but it's not full stop noir, w/ fedoras and femme fatales and the like. The posting schedule is basically when I can get them done and beta-d and up -- I originally said three to five days between to give myself breathing room, but the next bit is off w/ beta right now, so probably won't be that long.

Thanks for following along -- am also beta-ing now, too!!

thrace_adams September 10 2009, 01:48:29 UTC

Oh I liked this...I have to admit, I think the Jack segments are my favorite :)

blue_fjords September 10 2009, 02:30:25 UTC

Hee, I'm not surprised you'd like the Jack bits best! There's enough to go around!

thrace_adams September 10 2009, 02:32:28 UTC

*giggles* Am I that transparent :)