FIC: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 1/10)

[blue_fjords]

Title: The Carriage held but just Ourselves (Pt. 1/10)
Author: blue_fjordsRating: PG-13

Comments

[amand_r]

HOLY EFFING CRAP SO GOOD. CIA YVONNE AND HER TOO HIGH HEELS. MARRIED IANTO. AGENT TOSH!

YOU BRING OWEN INTO THIS AND I'LL FREAK OUT.

[blue_fjords]

Owen will be there! In, um, let me consult my outline...part four! Yay, Owen!!

And I left Yvonne out of the header b/c I wanted her to be a surprise! Glad you liked her too-high heels!

[amand_r]

I loved her. Your Jack narrative is fucking gorgeous.

[eumelia]

Oh my! I'm hooked already!

Queer CIA Jack, Married Ianto, YVONNE!!!! And Yay for Kathy Swanson, such an underused character both in canon and fanon.

Great use of canon knowledge, so fine!

Looking forward to more.

[blue_fjords]

Thanks! Yeah, I think Kathy Swanson is both smart and gorgeous, and I really wanted to write her. She makes sense in this fic, so there she goes!

And I really enjoy plopping in little pieces of canon into an AU world. I'm glad you like that!

Thanks for reading!

[hab318princess]

that was an amazing start...

[blue_fjords]

Hey, thanks! There's more where that came from!

[fide_et_spe]

Yay you did this, and you went and made Ianto married. Also I like Jack being from the CIA and Yvonne his boss, nice touch.

Oh another thing, I laughed at Kathy using the police cliche "What do we have here then?" thing is they do speak in those cliches, I once had a pc ring my door bell at 3 am to tell me he had "just caught some lads up to no good" next to my car. (They had nicked my tax disc)

[blue_fjords]

But did he call them hooligans?! ;) Maybe hooligans is just an American term...

Glad you like it so far! Hopefully it doesn't crash and burn!

[paragraphs]

Don't be nervous! :) You have something special here, I tell ya. *Beams.*

[blue_fjords]

Thanks, c! You're my ray of sunshine!

[paragraphs]

:) I will beam for you anytime.