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FIC: A Mighty Dark Night - Chapter I

Sep 05, 2011 23:53

Title: A Mighty Dark Night -- Chapter I
Author: blue_fjords
Rating: R
Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Word length: ~74,000
Warnings: violence, language and sex
Summary: Detective Dean Winchester meets Homeland Security Agent Castiel James over a corpse.
( I'll never get out of this world alive )

spn: sam, spn: dean, mandr is awesomesauce, spn: castiel, nick loves jb, spn: ellen, c is for cheerleader, q is a rock star, spn: bobby, spn: crowley, spn: gabriel, spn: balthazar, au, jenny = love, supernatural, spn: jo, kel is full of idears, crime novel, mandr makes me do shit, fic, spn: dean/castiel

Comments 2

laura_trekkie September 14 2011, 19:12:54 UTC

Great start. I love the case and it's convoluted twists and turns. Just who will Lilith turn out to be? Why does she wield so much power?

I also loved the characterisations, particularly the Dean-Ash and Dean-Sam banter and Dean's thoughts on Henricksen :). Cas being all mysterious is great, too.

What has Dean got himself into?

Laura.

ellethill April 28 2012, 10:34:43 UTC

Okay, I'm only a tiny bit into the first chapter but I have *got* to ask: how did you come up with Uriel and Gabriel's surnames? Because in Romanian "inger" (or înger to be more precise) means "angel" and "shmecher" (or, well, şmecher) means smth like "wise-ass," or even more accurately "trickster". I am intrigued.

And for that matter, why is Castiel's surname so... common?

ETA: Ah. There we go. 50 words later and Mr. Drac comes along. Apart from my suspension of disbelief flying out the window (not the story's fault, it always happens when my country's brought up in non-native works of fiction - have you watched the Buffy and Angel episodes where Angel's soul-related curse is brought up, for example? yikes...), now I can't help but wonder how you decided on this particular country as a source for your OC(s) :)