You know I'm here waiting for you (1/2)

[blue_eyed_1987]

Title: You know I'm here waiting for you (1/2 - currently unfinished WIP)
Fandom: Merlin
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Warnings: Intoxication, anonymous sex. Could possibly be labeled dub-con (highlight for details): Arthur continues to have 'anonymous' fun with Merlin, not letting Merlin in on the fact that he is Merlin;s mystery blond

Comments

[lplover22]

Normally dont read WIPs but this summary caught my attention. I do hope you finish it! It's such a Merlin/Arthur thing, lol. Super hot too! I can't wait for Merlin to find out it's Arthur! No real crit from me except that I wish it was longer ;)

[blue_eyed_1987]

I don't normally post WIPs unless I've got them all written, but I'm feeling so conflicted about this one >.<.

I'm so glad you like it! I've got a fair amount of the second half written, so I'm hoping to post it very soon!

[onaxe]

Ahaha, this was funny and rather steamy! Aw, your oblivious Merlin is cute. Lol, love the ending of this part, was Arthur hiding in the cloakroom? I could totally imagine that! XD

Loving this so far and really hope you finish it! :3

[blue_eyed_1987]

Aw, thank you :)

Arthur was hiding in the cloakroom yes. Poor attendant, having a panicky Arthur leap into his office :P

[stupidmuse_hate]

Wow, Gem! I really like this! (Yes, I read Merlin fic too, lol)

I love the suspense--has poor Arthur figured it out yet?

[blue_eyed_1987]

\o/ Glad you like it! (more things to flail at you about :P)

Yes? Sort of. He's putting 2 and 2 together :)

[stupidmuse_hate]

Flail away!

I sent you a fic--my own sort of flail--so I hope you got it :)

Do you think you're going to post the second half of this soon?

[blue_eyed_1987]

I just need to get a resolution down, really. How Merlin and Arthur are going to deal with it when it all comes out. So hopefully it should be quite soon?

I shall look at your flail very soon!

[kattale]

Oh, loving this so much!!! Sneaky Arthur, now that he knows, still keeping Merlin in the dark. :)
Can't wait for the next part - please post soon.

[blue_eyed_1987]

Thank you :) I'll get part 2 posted as soon as possible!

[k_nightfox]

I definitely like this. As for concrit, I have to say I think Merlin's inability to recognize Arthur would have gained more credibility if A) Merlin were drunk and/or B)He'd been unable to see Arthur's hair colour. If it was so dark he couldn't make out facial features, it's unlikely he'd have been able to make out hair colour. In the dark, colours tends to blend into monochrome. Also...if he couldn't see facial features...how could he assess him as "gorgeous"? I mean his build would have been appealing, the way he moved, probably his scent and the body contact all could have been very attractive but to call him "gorgeous"? That implies a visual impact that clearly would have given Arthur's identity away. Then there is voice? If this is someone he works with every day, unless Merlin is so situationally unaware as to be a danger to himself, the voice should at least have imbued him with some sense of familiarity.

All that aside, I do like this. It definitely can be so dark in a club you can't make someone out well enough to recognize

[blue_eyed_1987]

Yes, thank you. I see all your points, very good. Because he should recognise arthur's voice - he wouldn't have disguised it he first time (maybe the second time, because he is pervy :P ) but not the first...hmmm

I'm glad you're enjoying it!