Ohh! That was wonderful. I just died when Hitsugaya was being all shaky and emotional...it's hard to imagine what one might feel after like 100 years or whatever of being in (finally requited) love with someone...but you did a lovely job! All warm and fuzzy, I am. A great read all the way through, including the epilogue (but I preferred to comment here). Was pleasing to find that that Shakespeare sonnet was the inspiration--I love that one myself.
DANG THAT WAS GOOD! YOU CAPTURED THE EMOTIONS AND DIALOGUE MAGNIFICENTLY. AWESOME. IT'S ALMOST OVER, ISN'T IT? WELL I'M GOING TO TURN OFF THE CAPS LOCK AND SHUT UP FOR NOW AND GO OVER TO READ THE EPILOGUE.
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Ok, enough...but you've got a fan in me! :P
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NYAAHHH!
DANG THAT WAS GOOD! YOU CAPTURED THE EMOTIONS AND DIALOGUE MAGNIFICENTLY. AWESOME. IT'S ALMOST OVER, ISN'T IT? WELL I'M GOING TO TURN OFF THE CAPS LOCK AND SHUT UP FOR NOW AND GO OVER TO READ THE EPILOGUE.
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