How it Should Have Been

[blubird_pie]

Title: How It Should Have Been
Summary: Dean finds himself celebrating a pleasant 50th birthday with his family, but as inconsistencies in his memory start multiplying, he's forced to confront a much less idyllic reality.
Word count:< 1,700
Rated: pg-13 (language and sexuality)
Notes: Set S5; Spoilers through "Abandon all Hope"
Warnings: Cannon

Comments

[borgmama1of5]

This was sad, the glimpse of what could have been.

[blubird_pie]

Hey, first comment! Thanks for reading =)

[katieackles]

I really loved that! :) I loved the pace at which it moved - I usually get bored with reading (wow, I sound intelligent lol) but this was just perfect.

Thankyou for writing it :)

[blubird_pie]

Haha, if it had moved any slower, I probably would have been bored with writing it. Glad to know it worked for you, thanks for the comment!

[rince1wind]

GAh! Generally I feel "it was all a dream" stories are weak, but this worked very well. Partly, I think, because of its structure: It's not clear whether it "was all a dream" or an alternate timeline that happened/didn't happen. Sad.