[fanfic] Gone

Dec 13, 2010 19:03


Title: Gone

Author: me and my crazy imagination = blozzom_zone

Pairing : YabuHika & YamaJimaTaro

Rating: PG

Genre: Angst, A lil bit fluff

Summary: The very last moment Yabu had with his beloved one.

Warning: as always terrible English, characters’ death

But the three of us already understood why, we really did. )

itoshi no hika, fanfic: one shot, otp#1: yabuhika, happy family san-nin kyodai, prince kota

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kawaiimaix3 December 13 2010, 12:29:26 UTC
BOO!!

heehee

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kawaiimaix3 December 13 2010, 12:35:16 UTC
NUUUU~~

at first i thought it was Yabu but then when i realized it was Hikka i was like ;A;

this is very nice and i loved it :D

yabu went with him..aaah...that's good..

tears came to my eyes but didnt fall >.<
even ryu broke down crying T__T

yamajimataro...take care of each other :D

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blozzom_zone December 13 2010, 12:40:58 UTC
yeah, it was Hikaru ;A; I feel bad for making him in that state too T__T

thank you, Mai-chan <3 this is my very first time writing something really angsty, so glad it turned out quite okay :D I should learn to write angst from you ><

lol, it became good rather than sad, right?? I thought that way too lol xPP

please don't cry >< *hands over tissues*

yamajimataro: we will :)

thanks for reading and commenting as always, Mai-chan^^

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praew_js December 13 2010, 13:06:24 UTC
I think it's very nice fic.

I goona cry when I finish read it.

I like the sentence that "you guys are always like one soul in two bodies. So, how could Yabu-kun could ever continue living while the half part of him has already gone??"

I think it touch to many people heart.

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blozzom_zone December 13 2010, 13:09:18 UTC
really???>///< thank you for saying so ne:)

oh no, please don't cry *hand over some tissues*

well, I tried my best on that lines, so I'm glad you love it~!♥

aww...I would be very happy if they would <3

thanks a lot for reading and commenting ne=)

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pranks98 December 13 2010, 13:10:50 UTC
TT__TT
u such a great writer
arigatou nee

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blozzom_zone December 13 2010, 13:18:09 UTC
Please don't cry ><

I'm not that great, really^^" but I'll always try my best in writing :) thanks for your compliment though;)

I enjoyed writing this:) thank you for reading and commenting ne, Rahma-san=)

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aliciaswr December 13 2010, 13:40:07 UTC
T.T

/too buzy crying to comment.

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blozzom_zone December 13 2010, 13:43:21 UTC
but..but...I didn't intend to make people cry ><

please don't cry *hands over tissue*

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aliciaswr December 13 2010, 14:52:57 UTC
/cries harder

/joins YabuHika in paradise

/wears halo xD

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blozzom_zone December 13 2010, 14:55:19 UTC
wait~! why you even cries harder >< don't make me feel guiltier, Alicia ><

*join in with you xDD*

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matsujun19 December 13 2010, 14:26:17 UTC
i was here!
T_T *cry till i sleep*

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blozzom_zone December 13 2010, 14:37:31 UTC
and I feel bad for making everyone cried now ;A;

oyasumi though xDD

oh, and thanks for reading & crying commenting;)

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