Mentalist Fic WIP: The Red and the Grey, Chap 3/?
Title: The Red and the Grey, Chap 3/?
Author: BloodWrites
Rating: T (adult themes, some strong language, some mention of graphic violence in later chapters)
Synopsis: Follows the events of the season 3 finale, "Strawberries and Cream"
Disclaimer can be found in part 1 of this fic
Chapter 1 can be found here
Chapter 2 can be found here
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I really enjoyed the little hint towards progress here, not just between Jane and Lisbon (I may have jumped up and down a little when she told him to make sure to leave the address) but between him and the rest of the team as well.
[...]"One of the gentlemen in my cell block told me about it - it just took a few days for everything to, uh… Clear. Some of his business acquaintances had been using it."
"Using it for what?"
He waved his hand vaguely. "Oh - you know. This and that. You know criminals. But I got it for a song."
LMAO. Amazing, and oddly very Jane-like. He wouldn't think twice about what the apartment was used for as long as it served him a purpose now.
Also, loved his resolve not to get sucked into investigating Ellie, though, the end suggests he may have no choice.
Another wonderful chapter, can't wait for more ♥
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I know, I'm such a girl about this stuff. Writing the two of them is just so much fun!
Also, loved his resolve not to get sucked into investigating Ellie, though, the end suggests he may have no choice.
That was one of those it-could-go-either-way moments, but ultimately I do like to think that actually killing RJ has had some effect on him. He really is trying to start over... It just might not be quite so easy as one would hope.
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