Seasons out of Time (excerpt)

[bloodsong13t]

Seasons out of Time (excerpt)
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CONTENT:
Rating: Teen
Flavor: Humor/Drama
Language: some
Violence: no
Nudity: mentioned
Sex: no
Other: none

Author's Note:This is an excerpt from a chapter of "Shattered Stones," which is a story of Malcolm and Tommy, and what a disaster their relationship is after they lose

Comments

[dieastra]

Aw, nice! I loved the scene where he was thinking about all the possible gifts ;) And Malcolm had some very nice scenes again as well. As one expects from your stories ;)

I also loved the sentence where both voted against having the jet-ski in the pool LOL

[bloodsong13t]

do you have an alarm set for whenever anyone posts something on the web with the keywords 'malcolm merlyn'??? ;D you're like always reading stuff i post just after i post it and nobody else has even heard of it!

anyway, glad you liked it. :)

my favorite part is the sibling fight, and especially the two boys fighting. because they remind me of my elves. all that 'male bonding'! (and my spell checker went nuts in the 'dorkiness of dorkdatron' section. :X )

[dieastra]

LOL no, I am using my LJ friends list ;) That's what it is there for after all. When I am online, and look at it, every new entry any of my friends makes, appears right at the top, without me having to go to every single journal to see whether there is something new. I really like it.

I wonder what the new info "I hate swimming" will do to your teenager stories. You have to remember now to not put them into or near any pools?

[bloodsong13t]

yeah, now why did they say that??

oh well, at least tommy didn't say that! ;D

and what kid hates swimming pools!?!??!?!