Comments | bloodparade: FIC: What Once Was Lost (Rated: R, Leon/Cloud)

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FIC: What Once Was Lost (Rated: R, Leon/Cloud)

Jul 27, 2009 23:00

Title: What Once Was Lost
Pairing: Leon/Cloud, mentions of ?/Cloud

Warnings: Rape, angst, sex...just my usual

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cloud, leon, fanfiction

Comments 10

etrix July 29 2009, 03:11:57 UTC

I just re-read it and it's still a nicely realistic story of recovery and romance. Hopefully someone knows the link to the Silent Scream contest and you can enter it. =]

edit because I just realized this isn't posted on ffvii_yaoi or anywhere. Wassup wit dat?

bloodparade July 29 2009, 04:30:16 UTC

I was kind of stupid, and realized I could post it somewhere else. I did post it to KH yaoi, but that doesn't get enough traffic.

bloodparade July 29 2009, 04:58:35 UTC

PS. Thank you again for editing. And for the suggestion that I should enter the contest. I've been looking around for the link, but I haven't come up with something yet.

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bloodparade July 30 2009, 10:09:06 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
=)

elflover59 July 29 2009, 04:53:10 UTC

I loved this story specially the ending.

bloodparade July 30 2009, 10:10:43 UTC

Thank you. The ending kind of made me smile as well.

xiaa July 29 2009, 06:42:53 UTC

Damn that Sephiroth! Don't come back >:(

But I liked how Leon and Cloud were able to have a happy ending ^^; The angst was definitely believable, I love how you portray the characters throw their actions rather than just telling. Things like when Cloud was rummaging through the kitchen at ungodly hours or the morning or when he realized that his rapist was still out there and decided against going to work. It showed a lot of how much the robbery had affected him, and just made things so believable.

And the sex was so cute!!! ok I'll stop being a perv now

bloodparade July 30 2009, 10:17:12 UTC

YEAH! And take your ridiculously pretty hair with you!

I'll admit it. I am a sucker for happy endings. Like...a lot. I'm just glad I got it realistic enough.

And yes, the sex was fun to write too. Eh, we are all pervs here.

chemoetherapy July 31 2009, 00:27:38 UTC

I read this from my phone today and I really liked it. Even though it is a little cliche' (not much), it was really well written. I just had to comment (and I never comment).

bloodparade August 1 2009, 00:50:34 UTC

Well thank you. Is it wrong that the fact that you never comment makes me feel really proud?
And I tried to add my spin on, what I admit, is kind of a cliche plot device. I'm glad you liked it.