I Did It, Fuck Yes.

[blood_crow]

Title: The Wretched
Pairings/Characters: Kazeshini/Shirosaki and Wabisuke/Shirosaki
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Foul language, m/m, non-con, what could be considered...bondage?
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach, I only steal its characters so I can go on perverted conquests via fan fics. Also, all characters involved in sexual situations are fictional and

Comments

[figaro_figaro]

o___O (a GOOD o___O, mind you!)

This was mad scary. Kazeshini, being the bloodthirsty maniac he is, is... not predictable, but I can 'read' him. Wabisuke on the other hand just freaks me the fuck out! He's completely unreadable, it's impossible to tell what motivates him. It feels like Kazeshini played with Shiro, but Wabisuke - he broke him.

And you write Shiro perfectly. :) Too cocky for his own good, but still very clever.

Also - Cackles, lol! Best name ever for Kazeshini.

Great job!

[blood_crow]

I'm glad you enjoyed it?! Lol when I saw the o___O I wasn't sure. Yanno I'm not sure if I was going for scary but at the same time I'm happy it scared you! It's a compliment knowing that it got to you that much.

Personally I think Wabisuke is fascinating. It's the very fact that you don't know what's going on in his head that makes him so interesting. And when you consider his ability, appearance, and name...in English I think it's translated as "the penitent one". Someone who regrets their wrongdoings. I take that and put it together with the stone tablet and iron ball weighing him down.. It's like he's burden with his sins, or something. I can't to see where his character goes in the anime!

But ah, I'm glad you liked my Shirosaki! He's a tough kid in my mind so I don't think Wabisuke completely broke him. Just pissed him off like he's never been pissed off. If Shiro has his way he'll get the fucker back, one of these days ;D

[old_man_of_hoy]

Just pissed him off like he's never been pissed off. If Shiro has his way he'll get the fucker back, one of these days ;D
And please, pretty please, write that, too! I loved this a lot, but I really like Shirosaki and I soooo want him to get them back.

[blood_crow]

I love Shirosaki too! Keep in mind that I wasn't torturing him because I secretly dislike him. Not the case at all. It's just that when you get someone like Wabisuke involved...Yea, that changed the mood a lot.

But I really would like to write a continuation! If I get any future ideas I'll definitely crank them out, because Shiro fully intends on dishing out a little payback~

[haru_42]

Yay! First Kazeshini and Wabisuke fic! Its about time since they're awesome (and completely insane)! This was intense dude, but a good intense. You nailed Kazeshini's personality though, in my opinion! And Wabisuke...was Wabisuke (he looks pretty scary so I'm sure he's pretty fucked up). Great job!

P.S. are you back to writing fics again? That'd be awesome! Are you still on MSN?

[blood_crow]

Awww I'm glad you thought so!! My first time writing any of them so it's great to know that I did Kazeshini justice xD The three of them are good for Halloween, yesh?

P.S. I'm really not sure...most probably not :( I just had to write this one because I didn't see anyone else doing it anytime soon. And yea, I am! I never see you on, though. It's been forever Haru!

[drabbleandfluff]

Fuck yes you did!! This was crazy good stuff! I love the voice you use for Shiro... yes, he's a bit touched in the head, but hell... compared to the other two I guess he's the most sane in the bunch! :)
Ah, but seriously, this is delicious... you've got the absolute fuck-all crazy of Kaze, and the absolute creepiness of Wabisuke totally believably spot on! (not to mention the slight bit of ShuKira by proxy)... and oh, this hate sex is awesome! Really, I'm not usually into non-con, but something about this filler arc has piqued my dark interests... I think I kinda like that our 'heros' have such fucked up zans! :D
and poor Shiro gets denied twice!! I think I'm supposed to feel bad for him, but I just had this stupid grin on my face.

My fave line in this whole fic:
This zanpakuto is nothin' but bad juju, especially when he's eyeing my meat

haha! OMG... priceless!

[blood_crow]

Hahaha believe it or not I was really nervous about all three of them being OOC in my hands. But I'm happy with how they turned out, especially Shirosaki! Once I got a halfway decent plot in my mind it wasn't that hard to get inside his head.

But go figure, I'm not into non-con either! I'm not into it at all, actually. That being said, it's hard for me to think of these three guys and consider anything but non-con. All three of them are just so crazy that anything consensual/fluffy seems out of the question. Then again I couldn't bring myself to write complete non-con. Even though Kaze forced himself on Shiro, Shiro still enjoyed himself...that is until the guy stopped his orgasm.

AHA!! I'm glad you liked that, it's one of my favorite lines too >D

[kasey_sanada]

Holy shit. Where the fuck have I been?! I can't believe I let this story get past me for TWO DAMN MONTHS.

CACKLES. (snorts) I love it. Totally fits Kazeshini. But damn, Wabisuke... didn't know he had it in him.

Awesome story. Great job <3

[blood_crow]

Where have you been?! I feel like it's been ages since I've seen you/talked to you.

Ahaha!! Cackles is the perfect name for Kazeshini. And I hope you liked my Wabisuke? I don't think fandom gives him the credit he deserves! I thought he was damn sexy when he first appeared. It just sucks that he lasted for less than one episode before he died -.-

Thanks for commenting!

[foxflare]

Wow. Damn. I set this aside to think on it and coming back to it now I still don't know what to say other than oh, snap, Shiro got fucking owned. O_O

That was freaky as hell. I think what got me the most wasn't even what Kazeshini and Wabisuke did, but how utterly random it was -- like even if you lock your doors at night, if someone wants to get in, they're gonna, in this case one of them with a chainsaw and the other with a sledgehammer. o_o; I love that Shirosaki is by default the voice of reason (and, um, how he is the least virgin-y virgin ever -- I never expected noncon to make me lol, but his voice here is just so scandalized XD), and your descriptions of Kazeshini's feral energy, his purrs and barks and shrieks. . .unf unf. But WABISUKE. Holy crap. What he did at the end, like the way he knocks/slides his sword against things? That was so much hotter than it had any right to be. Guh. If I have nightmares tonight, I don't think I'll mind, so long as they finish (or don't, haha) like that. . .

[blood_crow]

Yea, even I'm not sure what to say of this one XD

Here's what happened. I'd seen Kazeshini and the anime and immediately thought 'how would things go if someone like him meant someone like Shirosaki'. There alike in a lot of ways so it was just something I had to wonder about...and originally I wanted to do something consensual with just the two of them, but then Wabisuke appeared in the anime and I just got this idea. His creeping presence and the ability of his zanpakuto... It was those two things alone that made this entire fic happen. If it wasn't for him this probably would have turned out a lot different.

I hope it didn't seem too random? It was a oneshot and I didn't want to get too involved, so I bypassed any serious plot and just focused on the three of them and how their personalities would react to each other. And you know, I felt kinda bad for doing it to Shirosaki, because he's just so badass. But how could it not happen when Wabisuke can impair him?!

[foxflare]

Kazeshini/Shirosaki/Grimmjow OT3? ;D (Christ, there'd be nothing left of any of them after the first tussle, just strips of flesh strewn hither and yon. . .)

Oh, no, I liked the randomness -- random is Kazeshini's style, and going along for the ride is Wabisuke's (in that he's not really openly aggressive, but is always watching for and will never pass up an opportune moment to strike). It could've been Muramasa who put them up to it, or just that they saw a shiny thing and had to go check it out; either way, they'd've been coming out of nowhere from Shirosaki's POV, which, y'know, is the fic, so. 's good. *grins*

[blood_crow]

I totally love Grimmjow/Kazeshini, and I would have written it myself a long time ago if I could come up with a decent idea.

Good!! XD It was more a saw a shiny thing than Muramasa putting them up to it. Perhaps Kazeshini sensed the hollow in Ichigo when he fought the kid, and it intrigued him. Then of course Wabisuke is his partner in crime so he got the guy and they paid Ichigo's inner world a visit >:D