New Fic-Star Wars-Obidala-"Stardust"- Rated G

[bleeding_muse]

I took some requests on my personal journal to get my writing juices flowing again. Here is the first one :)

lealynnkenobi requested a happy obidala fic

Comments

[erunamiryene]

I like this. The scene is peaceful. :) (And it kind of ties into a fic I wrote, which I find interesting. :D )

If you'd like a quickie beta'd version, I'd be more than happy to do it for you. (I'm an editing nerd and have lots of time on my hands today.)

[tianaluthien]

Just had to say...I LOVE you icon. It is awesome, because it is so true...

[erunamiryene]

I know, right? :D I got it specifically because my favorite character in SW is Anakin, and GL just decimated that man's personality. And turned him emo. So yeah ... screw canon. XD

I dig your icon, too! :D

[lealynnkenobi]

That is a cool icon! "Screw Canon" I do that so well... hee

[lealynnkenobi]

That was beautiful, Nicole.

Romance is in the air... both in character.

“Don’t you think it’s beautiful?”

Obi-Wan found his eyes drawn back to her. “Yes.” He whispered. “I do.”

My heart turned into a pile of goo, when I read that.

Thank you, from the bottom of my goo. LOL

[bleeding_muse]

yay!! i'm so glad you liked it, i was a bit worried, i feel like i'm shaking the dust off my fingers lol.

i was quite fond of that line :)

[tianaluthien]

Excuse me while I

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Ok. That was lovely. Subtle romance, gorgeous imagery, and in-character. Excuse me while I reread it now... :)

Eesh, I love this 'ship...

[bleeding_muse]

**blushes**

you are too sweet, thank you so much hon :) that means a lot.

[yappichick]

Awesome story! You did a great job of making them feel in character while showing their feelings. Great stuff! :D :D

[bleeding_muse]

thank you so much i really appreciate hearing that :)

[e_schemer]

I agree with sw_fangirl: I like it for the peace and quiet, it seems very canon in a way a lot of Obidala isn't. Very nice job :)

[bleeding_muse]

thank you :) i try to keep my characters "in character" so to speak :)