Comments | bleedforyou1: Fic: "Burn For You" (Arthur/Merlin) PG

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Fic: "Burn For You" (Arthur/Merlin) PG

Jan 16, 2012 14:37

Title: Burn For You
Author: bleedforyou1
Pairing: Arthur/Merlin
Rating: PG
Beta: blue_eyed_1987 and vanessawolfie
Summary: When Merlin touched him, it always seemed like fire, like warmth that ignited Arthur’s very soul.
Word count: 1,957
Warnings: Fluffy fluff.
Note: For this prompt at kinkme_merlin :)

( Burn For You )

pg, what the hell am i doing, i wrote this, merlin, fic, arthur is so cute, one-shot, kmm, merlin/arthur, fic: one-shot

Comments 13

reveuse2 January 16 2012, 23:00:46 UTC

"The most surprising part of his night, however, was when Leon, who had been sitting at Arthur’s right, as his first knight, moved away and pulled out his chair. He gestured for Merlin to sit, and when the man did not, Gwaine pushed him, manhandling him into the seat.

“Huh,” Arthur commented lightly as Merlin looking around nervously from his new spot next to Arthur. “I could get used to this.”

Oh, please. Be still my foolish heart. I love it. :)

bleedforyou1 January 19 2012, 22:21:53 UTC

Lol! So glad you liked that part xD Thank you!

archaeologist_d January 17 2012, 02:23:12 UTC

I loved how everyone reacted. Oh, poor Merlin to be outed like that. At least Arthur didn't try and kill him. Well done.

bleedforyou1 January 19 2012, 22:22:54 UTC

Haha, of course Arthur couldn't kill him (He loves him too much, heehee)

Thanks so much for reading!

mickey2x5 January 17 2012, 02:48:15 UTC

Because really, it had been such a nice night, and he was really getting tired of people crashing his feasts and parties.

LOL!

This was a great story! I loved the different reactions everyone had, and how Arthur just went along with things, almost resignedly.

bleedforyou1 January 19 2012, 22:23:48 UTC

Lol! I'm so glad you liked that line, because it really brought some humor to Arthur's mind ;)

Thanks so much for your kind words! Yes, poor resigned!Arthur is my personal favorite ;)

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bleedforyou1 January 19 2012, 22:24:15 UTC

Aww thanks so much! AND YES, you are definitely allowed to say funny, because I was totally aiming for that ;) Thanks!

k_nightfox January 17 2012, 07:44:04 UTC

I liked how Arthur was all like "Ah, so that's why! So many things finally make sense. Huh, go figure." about Merlin's magic. Confused? Yes. Angry? No. And the rather tired, dismissive way he dealt with Bayard was quite amusing.

bleedforyou1 January 19 2012, 22:24:55 UTC

Haha Thanks so much, I'm so glad you got the same thing that I was trying to portray with Arthur's feelings of dismissal xD