FIC: Come a Horseman (1/4)

[blankversesfic]

Title: Come a Horseman (1/4)
Author: blankversesfic
Rating: Overall NC-17, this part marked for language
Pairing: Sam/Dean, OMC/OFC
Warning: Violence, language, slash, wincest, misappropriation of apocalyptic materials. Split between crackery and angst.
Notes: For the sammessiah Anti-Christmas extravaganza, written for caimenae. I hope you like it!
Disclaimer: Sam and Dean

Comments

[blankversesfic]

The prompt was awesome. I've having so much fun with this story. I'm glad you're liking it! (and the exchange is kick ass fun, too).

[swordage]

This would work just fine on its own, but to hear there will be a second part! Glee!

[blankversesfic]

There may actually be three -- I'm having too much fun writing the different horsemen.

[dreamlittleyo]

Ooh, nice! I can't wait to see part 2 of this one! *is excited* I read the summary and just about squealed--and I love your tone throughout this. So many lines made me laugh out loud, and I can't even TELL you how much I appreciate that. Add to that SUCH an original concept and yes please. More now?

My absolute favorite line:
“A lot of people hunt, dude, and they don’t draw shit from Charmed on their ceilings.”

[blankversesfic]

I'm so pleased that I got the Four Horsemen as my prompt for the exchange, it's mad fun to try to write what they'd be like and how Sam would deal with them. And I'm glad you're liking plucky comic relief Jordan, too. (More coming later today)

[mneiai]

This is really great, I love the POV and the pacing of this.

[blankversesfic]

Thanks! I like when there's people outside of Dean and Sam watching what they do, it's fun to see how they react to the whole world that they boys have grown up with as "normal".

[ex_rosegany]

Ah, this is awesome! I love outsider POVs of the boys, and Jordan is a very likeable, easy to sink into kind of character. He describes Sam really well, the humor threads in nicely, and if you hadn't had me already, I definitely would've been on board for sure after meeting Famine.

“You don’t happen to be his man-boy, do you?”

“His what?”

“His man-boy. His helpmeet. His consort. The one who is graced with the privilege of fulfilling his needs. His lover, perhaps?”

“Uh, no, dude, I’m -- we’re just roommates.”

“Oh.” He brightened. “Good, then that position’s still available.”

*dies*

And chills at Sam's pain, his power, increasing after losing Dean...

Loving this and wishing there was more than just one part to wait for! But I'm looking forward to that :)

[blankversesfic]

(there may be more than one part, I'm having too much fun to wrap it up in just one other chapter).

I love the outside POV, too, it's always fun. And Jordan being there lets it have more comedy than just Sam would, which makes me happy. (the weather's too nice for straight-up angst, finally). And if you like Famine, I hope you'll like the other three, as well,