Fic: Four Days at the Side of Captain Jack Harkness

Feb 07, 2007 21:47

Title: Four Days at the Side of Captain Jack Harkness
Pairing: Jack/Gwen, Gwen/Owen, Gwen/Rhys, Jack/Ianto, Ianto/Lisa
Rating: PG 13
Spoilers: Up to and including 1x13
Summary: When she said she wanted to sit with him they thought she'd meant an hour. Two, tops.
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Author's Note: Okay, first I must say this fic would have ( Read more... )

fic, torchwood, gwen cooper

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prettyquotable February 6 2007, 12:46:35 UTC
HI NAT. This is pretty much made of awesome. I love it and I love you! :D I'm not the biggest of Owen/Gwen-ers out there *hides* but I love what you've done with them here, it's really believable and awesome. And I love your Gwen, totally her.

The Ianto bit is my favourite I think, because I can really see that happening. And he brought him coffee and I might have to marry you for that line, haha.

But I think this is my favourite part, because it's so true:

Give one man her body, the other her mind while her naïve boyfriend fights for an ounce of attention as he clings on to the right to filter her dirty laundry.

That? Is marvellous. Poor Rhys.

*hugs and kisses* I think I've rambled enough, but know that this is simply AWESOME my dear. :D

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blak_strawberry February 6 2007, 13:06:34 UTC
Thank you so much!! For everything!!

I'm so happy you liked Ianto, I hope I did him justice because I know how much you love him

*craves coffee now*

And Rhys, I must say I have grown to love him, or rather Gwen's mistreatment of him :P

And I'm really glad you liked that part, because I was nervous about putting it in there!

Love you heaps!!!!

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blak_strawberry February 8 2007, 12:12:27 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it :-)

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terrylj February 6 2007, 15:08:26 UTC
I can't stand Gwen, and I can't understand her choices, but I think you've really captured her feelings here.

And I LOVE the thought of Ianto bringing Jack coffee. That's canon now in my head, thank you. :)

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blak_strawberry February 8 2007, 12:20:17 UTC
Thank you so much! I just had to include Ianto's coffee in there, and it just seemed fitting for the scene. I'm really happy you liked it!

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blak_strawberry February 8 2007, 12:26:59 UTC
Thank you for your lovely comments!

And I completely agree, it's still a little painful to watch Jack die.

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bzzinglikeneon February 6 2007, 16:04:26 UTC
This was absolutely perfect. You have captured Gwen and her constant internal struggle to a T. Very, very well done.

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blak_strawberry February 8 2007, 12:30:58 UTC
Thank you so much! I was actually a little afraid I wouldn't get the characterisation right because when I started this I'd only been watching Torchwood for about 2 weeks, and a part of me felt like I didn't know the characters well enough. I'm glad it all worked out though :)

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