Hopefully I can manage to finish this tommorow.
The first bit of my English essay. If I can colour you interested, any comments are appreciated ^_^ . It still lacks an ending, and pretty much any backup/quotations/etc. The first sentence in particular irritates me a bit...it's too wordy, doesn't quite work right. I also probably need a clearer thesis, as even I'm not quite sure what it is.
( Lost in Adaptation: Douglas Adams’ The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy )
( Lost in Adaptation: Douglas Adams’ The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy )
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