My Pretty Lady - Chapter Two

Apr 25, 2010 18:35

I can't believe the overwhelming response I got for starting this! Thank you, everyone! 
It's new chapter time! 
And... I've just had one of my plot bunnies crushed. I've finally gotten around to checking out the deleted scenes on the Blades of Glory DVD and one of them is exactly the same as a fanfic that I've had in mind ever since I first started ( Read more... )

pg13, chazz/jimmy, fic

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xenafox April 26 2010, 05:54:05 UTC
Yaaay you posted more :D

I'm really tired so I will probably be FAIL at a good comment, but I really like the dialogue and stuff XD And kind of...that Chazz had a cigarette. I don't like smoking and don't think he like makes a habit out of it but I too have written Chazz smoking when he is REALLY stressed out.

More! =D

Btw what scene is it from the deleted scenes that you mentioned? If it's the orphan thing that's actually also in the original script.

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mschatfield April 26 2010, 09:12:20 UTC
I did post more!

I'm not a big fan of smoking either; I'm actually allergic to cigarette smoke, as luck would have it. But I think it just fits the situation with characters sometimes, and this was one of them! XD;

More'll be showing up, I promise!

And the deleted scene... Yes, it's the orphan thing. I had this whole idea when I first watched the movie that Chazz must've been in the same orphanage and that he's the one who taught Jimmy to skate, but Jimmy wouldn't realise it was him until he heard the phrase "Human Onion" that Chazz likes to use...

It was a very silly idea, and it turns out that it was meant to be in the film anyway! Damn my unoriginal thoughts brain!

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lady_mouse04 April 27 2010, 02:35:02 UTC
Dude, that was a MARVELOUS fanfic!!!!!

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mschatfield April 27 2010, 11:24:50 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it! It means a lot that people are enjoying the things that I write. ^-^

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