Fight to Live, chapter 3

Jul 13, 2010 23:46

Title: Fight to live
Rating: PG-13
Paring: USUK established
Theme: Fight
Summary: "England sighed, “We are not surrounded, Alfred.” Even as he said that he glanced out the window to be sure. He wished he had a weapon right now."
Warnings:OCs. Curse words. Violence in later chapters.
Note: sorry this took nearly a month. ^^; ... again. -_-;
OF CABBAGES AND KINGS )

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luminous_vibe July 14 2010, 06:58:39 UTC
:P

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luminous_vibe July 14 2010, 07:58:43 UTC
It was only then it stuck him how much he truly loved England.

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWW! True wuv! ^.^ So cute. Anyway, now that I'm done gushing...

I really like the dialogue in this one, you're getting better about making it natural. I like it. :D



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blade_cross July 14 2010, 14:34:23 UTC
yay! i was hoping that the dialogue was better. thank you.

and I like writing mush. its fun!

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fantasyname July 14 2010, 19:40:48 UTC
Your icon fits perfectly =D
Can't, but will wait for the next chapter ^^

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