Fic: Consonance

Sep 19, 2010 00:28

Title: Consonance
Author: viceindustrious 
For: anneka_neko  
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Today is a day for indulgence and so, Blackwood thinks, it should be wrapped in silk like any proper treasure.

Consonance )

rating: nc-17, author: viceindustrious, fanfic, fic exchange

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anneka_neko September 19 2010, 00:40:56 UTC
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I. THAT. I. THAT. I I I I I I I!!!!!

THAT WAS SO FUCKIN' INCREDIBLE I JUST I JUST I JUST I CANNOT EVEN I THERE ARE NO WORDS THERE WILL NEVER BE WORDS THERE CANNOT BE WORDS WORDS ARE INCAPABLE!

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inamac September 19 2010, 20:15:44 UTC
This.

Fghagthn..........

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viceindustrious September 28 2010, 03:52:34 UTC
Guys, guys, thank you so much for your random assortments of letters! They are the best response to a fic like this and make me giddy with joy! :D

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sinick September 19 2010, 02:48:26 UTC
...I think my monitor melted.

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viceindustrious September 28 2010, 03:51:44 UTC
Then my mission is accomplished! :D

Seriously, I love comments like these. Thanks so much!

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unsettledink September 19 2010, 15:44:00 UTC
Coward makes a humming noise, a purr really and stretches lazily in his bonds. Not nearly so pretty, but that little stretch of gleeful pleasure is exactly what I did. Mmmmmm. Talk about making my day.

Today is a day for indulgence and so, Blackwood thinks, it should be wrapped in silk like any proper treasure. That's what I love best about this. It's all indulgence, indulging the reader, indulging Coward, indulging Blackwood - there's just such a sense of Blackwood just reacting to the utter deliciousness of Coward. It doesn't feel like he's planned any of this out, like he's try to make it mean anything. He's just enjoying himself, and enjoying that Coward enjoys it. Nom.

Coward had stirred Banter! Eeee! And then, slipped in there all subtle like, they'll have her on the altar

I adore all the little touches Blackwood's giving, these small, casual things like he can't quite help himself, like he can't quite keep his hands off Coward for any length of time. Who can blame him? Ah, it's gorgeous.

...if anything would be too ( ... )

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viceindustrious September 28 2010, 03:55:27 UTC
Thank you so much!

You know it just made my day when I read this comment the first time because, I made you happy! That gave me all warm and fuzzy thoughts, seriously, what with all the angst? It's a novel sensation! Something happy with none of the bitter.

Just. Me. Grinning forever! :D

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timewillrewind September 19 2010, 18:31:35 UTC
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First keyboardsmash ever. Because, really. I have no words to express the amazing-ness of this.

"Coward had stirred just long enough to call him a barbarian for taking milk instead of lemon before flipping his pillow over onto the cool side and drifting back into a doze."

Oh, and this? LOVE. Like, this much *spreads arms as wide as they go*

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viceindustrious September 28 2010, 03:51:10 UTC
Thank you! Thank you!

*grins like an idiot* Ha! I love that you love that line. That is my favourite bit because, seriously, who doesn't want to listen to Blackwood and Coward being snarky about tea!

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