PotC-Fic - Growing shapes (1) The cave

Oct 10, 2007 13:52



Growing shapes

Part 1 - The cave

I found her in the smuggler’s cave, just as expected. Sitting on the same rock as usual, embracing her knees, her gaze lost to the visible part of horizon. She didn’t move when I approached; didn’t look at me when she spoke.

“James…”

Nothing more, no eye contact, not the smallest sign that she even bothered with ( Read more... )

potc, fanfiction

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artic_fox October 11 2007, 10:18:01 UTC
Oooh, intriguing! I love the setting in the cave, and how it is told in first person narration! I'm sorry I couldn't beta this, but looks like underworldvixen has done a fabulous job. I look forward to the rest!

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blackpoetcat October 12 2007, 20:59:54 UTC
I'm glad you could take the time to read it and that you like my story, so please don't apologize :-)

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ipitydaf00l October 19 2007, 21:37:00 UTC
I normally tend to lurk in this fandom, but I happen to like this 'what if'. It is very well done, and I'm happy to know that on another tab is links to other parts so I can keep reading.

Sorry that this isn't a better comment, but I wanted to say that much.

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ditte3 May 26 2017, 16:09:19 UTC
Oh poor Elizabeth. She is or will be abused by Will.

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ditte3 May 26 2017, 16:09:59 UTC
Controlling man.

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ditte3 May 26 2017, 16:10:17 UTC
Controlling man.

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ditte3 May 26 2017, 16:11:47 UTC
Oh poor Elizabeth. She is or will be abused by Will.

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