Comments | blackoberst: A breath is but a soundless whisper ch. 2

blackoberst

A breath is but a soundless whisper ch. 2

Mar 27, 2009 12:42

Title: A breath is but a soundless whisper ch. 2: Watch that step

Pairing: Spuffy

Rating: R

Summary: What if Spike were the one to find Buffy in the water in The Prophecy?

Spoilers/Warnings: BtVS:S1/ Adult language

Disclaimer: Not mine, really! So please don't sue. Joss, Fox, Mutant enemy and all the others are the ones!

Beta: dusty273

AN: So, this is ( Read more... )

spuffy, literature unfinished, breath is but a whisper, fic, wip

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blackoberst March 29 2009, 10:04:01 UTC

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it.

louise39 March 27 2009, 23:47:03 UTC

“Are you here to save me again?” The earnestness in her eyes caught him by surprise... This was a scared girl who had seen her own death and had been betrayed by the guy that was supposed to help her. Despite himself, Spike’s battered heart softened for her.

The dance continues as they meet again after Dru and Angel have betrayed them.

Did you mean 'taut' in this sentence? "her taught stomach"

blackoberst March 29 2009, 10:05:40 UTC

Thank you for reviewing and *runs and edits, then whistles innocently* It's just like I want it. Thanks for pointing out the mistake.