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FIC: Returning the Favour

May 09, 2010 01:08

Title: Returning the Favour
Pairing: Neil/David
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is RPF. I am in no way implying that the following ever took place. It is a work of fiction.
Summary: Neil comes home from a day of shooting on The Smurfs to find a surprise from David.
Author's Note: Sequel to The List. Hours after posting it I wished I'd held off, so ( Read more... )

pg-13, character: neil patrick harris, pairing: neil/david, character: david burtka, rps

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naughtyelf May 9 2010, 16:38:23 UTC

♥

Thanks!

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naughtyelf May 9 2010, 16:39:25 UTC

Hee, I choose to believe that it did, too! :D

lady_demolition May 9 2010, 07:46:07 UTC

Oh gosh, this was beyond cute! I don't have words for it.
Just'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww'
This was the cutest idea EVER!
Well done! =D
and I agree with Helena, this totally happened! ;D

naughtyelf May 9 2010, 16:40:00 UTC

Thank you :D

:D

pikka May 9 2010, 09:23:10 UTC

Aaww! The cuteness. It's probably too naive to believe that they are this adorable all the time, but I totally want to believe it. (And I'm glad someone writes bright, fluffy fanfiction for them; I really fail to do that for some reason.)

naughtyelf May 9 2010, 16:35:19 UTC

Hee, in my head, they totally have plenty of nights when they just watch TV or when one of them is already asleep when the other one gets home, or when they fight or whatever... but I only want to write about the fluffy cute ones ;)

At the moment anyway :D

idioticonion May 9 2010, 10:33:53 UTC

*sigh*

Oh dear, I'm addicted to the fluff of your fic! This is just adorable.

Number 1 was particularly genius.

(just one tiny thing - you kept saying "apartment", but don't they still live in that massive house in Studio City? I might very well be behind on the gossip of course!)

naughtyelf May 9 2010, 11:15:09 UTC

I think in LA they do, but I thought they had an apartment in New York which is where the Smurfs shooting is happening? I could be wrong though!

idioticonion May 9 2010, 12:05:39 UTC

Thank you for indulging me! For some reason it hadn't sunk in that they were in New York. Now it makes so much sense! :-)

naughtyelf May 9 2010, 16:37:27 UTC

I should probably add that to the summary. It was one of those things that was obvious in my head (because it's now, and that's where Neil is now) but is less obvious for anybody who isn't in my head!

I'm glad you liked it anyway. I think that's my fluff quota for the year fulfilled, now I feel like I need to go away and write something really dark and angsty (in any fandom!) to stop me feeling like I'm coated in sugar, ha!