FIC: The List

May 07, 2010 21:14

Title: The List
Pairing: Neil/David
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: This is RPF. I am in no way implying that the following ever took place. It is a work of fiction.
Words: 357
Summary: David has just arrived home from a few days away without Neil.
Author's Note: I read this and I couldn't help myself!

David made himself a coffee as he waited for his laptop to load up. )

pg-13, character: neil patrick harris, pairing: neil/david, character: david burtka, rps

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pikka May 7 2010, 20:30:47 UTC
I literally " lol'd" at my screen at David's reply. Very cute!

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naughtyelf May 7 2010, 22:22:09 UTC
Hee, thanks! That was the reaction I was hoping to get! :-D

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naughtyelf May 7 2010, 22:23:50 UTC
Yay, thanks! And I might have been struck by a bunny for a sort of sequel, in the couple of hours since I posted this!

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lady_demolition May 7 2010, 20:50:50 UTC
That was great!
Abolutely adorable and it totally made me smile.
=D

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naughtyelf May 7 2010, 22:25:04 UTC
Yay, I like fics that make me smile so I'm glad I managed to do the same! Thanks!

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always_been May 7 2010, 21:34:13 UTC
This fic was just as made of win as Neil's list! Nice work :)

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naughtyelf May 7 2010, 22:25:51 UTC
Hee! Thanks! What an awesome compliment!

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idioticonion May 7 2010, 22:42:54 UTC
I just love your characterisation of David here - I can totally believe this actually happened - heck, I want it to have happened! Neil is an utterly adorable dork, and I'm sure David's a sucker for it.

*sighs*

*sighs some more*

*reads fic again*

Glorious.

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naughtyelf May 8 2010, 00:28:16 UTC
:D Thanks! I'm glad it came off realistically, and that you liked it!

I'm maybe possibly maybe working on a semi-sequel at the moment. I was reluctant to post this earlier because it was so short, but I liked the little snippet of David's day that it gave. Then less than an hour after posting I realised what else could have happened... but it was separate enough that I figured "Well hey... just write another one!"

So there's that. :)

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idioticonion May 8 2010, 10:19:19 UTC
Ooo, very curious! Have you written it yet? I'm intrigued.

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naughtyelf May 8 2010, 11:38:14 UTC
Most of it! It just needs tidying up now. Hopefully I should be able to post it today :)

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