FIC: Burnout

Mar 14, 2010 00:48

Title: Burnout
Pairing: Neil/David
Author: blackmustache
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: This is RPF. I am in no way implying that the following ever took place. It is a work of fiction.
Summary: Neil and David have a very rare week off.
Author’s Note: I don't know where this came from, but I had an idea when I was in bed one night, got up to write it ( Read more... )

character: neil patrick harris, pairing: neil/david, character: david burtka, fandom: himym, rps

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raynewser March 14 2010, 04:11:48 UTC
The David reaching over to turn off the phone part was great!
I love Neil and David fic.
Thank you! :)

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naughtyelf March 15 2010, 01:09:33 UTC
Thank you :)

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pikka March 14 2010, 07:48:04 UTC
Look at that! Rach has a thing for RPF; who would have known. ;)

Love me some well-written scenes, and this sure is one. And if we are being honest, we all imagine that something like this could be happening, considering Neil's cumulating gigs (I've written a similar story a few days ago, actually), sooo, why not write it down?

… clearly my brain is still in bed.

Anyway, loved it. Thanks for sharing!

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naughtyelf March 15 2010, 01:06:47 UTC
Hehe, my RPF side doesn't raise its head very often, but for some reason with Neil and David its quite happy to! I think it's because they keep their private moments and affection to themselves so my brain likes to imagine what might be going on behind those doors :D

I'm glad you liked it! I had to tell idioticonion that I had started a fic to make sure I would finish it - if I say out loud/in writing that it's happening, I feel more obliged to continue! I've been rubbish with finishing fics lately so I'm glad I finally got one out! :)

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idioticonion March 14 2010, 10:20:52 UTC
Just beautiful! I love how David cares so much, and worries so much, and I love his klutzy attempt to get to the phone at the start.

It amuses me that even though Neil was doing The Cube (which presumably meant at least some time rehearsing?) he still seemed to be out gallivanting in London with Derren Brown at night and stuff. He just seems like the kind of guy who can't slow down ever, whether he's working or not!

Wonderful story. Love it.

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naughtyelf March 15 2010, 01:08:54 UTC
Thank you :)

I know what you mean about his gallivanting! All I can think is that at least he did say during the taping that he'd spent a lot of time in the hotel room watching the English version over the week, getting to know the games etc, so at least he must have spent SOME time at least semi relaxing. Even if he was making notes or whatever.

See now I find myself wanting to write that!

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idioticonion March 15 2010, 18:01:59 UTC
You know I want you to write it... :-)

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trinelise3 March 14 2010, 22:44:17 UTC
Thank you. It was a sweet storie.And Yea his attempt to get to the phone was cute.

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naughtyelf March 15 2010, 01:09:05 UTC
Thanks!

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lady_demolition March 20 2010, 09:24:16 UTC
I loved it!
And I loved the phone part too it was legen-...wait for it...-DARY! so cute =)
and the way David worries/cares about Neil was just awesome.

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