House ficlet: Human Habitation

Mar 12, 2011 12:56

Author: blackmare
Characters: House, Wilson
Warnings: None; SPOILERS for 7.16
Length: 476 words
Summary: The quiet end of a very, very bad day. Based on next week's promo.

He hasn't had your bed removed. )

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menolly_au March 12 2011, 19:19:49 UTC
Oh, that was lovely, Wilson giving House just what he needs at this moment in time. Very nice.

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blackmare March 12 2011, 21:09:20 UTC
Thanks.

:-)

I don't, of course, expect anything like this to happen on the show, but it makes sense to me that it could.

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srsly_yes March 12 2011, 19:27:55 UTC
Very nice, very civilized. If only it 7x16 would play out this way.

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blackmare March 12 2011, 21:10:13 UTC
*smiles*

I expect to enjoy Monday's show regardless, but this would be nice, wouldn't it? They're not out of the woods yet by any means, here, just taking a break.

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flywoman March 12 2011, 19:29:17 UTC
You know I'm a huge sucker for just this kind of scenario. What makes this one special is the attention to detail - the smell of an unused guest room infected by Sam's territorial femininity, the sight of Wilson's unmade bed and shoes sitting out. Nice work.

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blackmare March 12 2011, 21:12:41 UTC
The details mostly came about because House would have needed a reason not to sleep in his own bed. Wilson's room providing a lived-in comfort that House's bedroom-turned-disused-guest-room didn't ... that made sense. That was a reason House could (just barely) accept.

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justjuly4 March 12 2011, 19:42:02 UTC
Well done. I liked the way you added the details. Made the story realistic and comforting.

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blackmare March 12 2011, 21:14:33 UTC
Thank you!

Really, this little scene is almost nothing but the details. I needed a reason for House to do what he did, and those little things added up to one. Glad you enjoyed it.

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sara_tsuzuki March 12 2011, 19:42:41 UTC
LOVE IT!!

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blackmare March 12 2011, 21:15:09 UTC
Thanks! It was a pleasant little thing to write.

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