Verbum Caro Factum Est : 9

[blacklid]

XXXII.

April 20

“’The only way to kill something this powerful is to call upon the wrath of something more powerful.’“That’s exactly what it says?” Sam’s knees bounced under his elbows as he rubbed his hands together

Comments

[lila_blue_b]

AAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!! OMG!! That was amazing! You should know before I say it that I think there needs to be a sequel! Why couldn't it have happened like this! Really, it's like an episode come to life, but better...

*buries face in hands* Well, that killed me good and ded.

I see no issues that you need to take care of before posting publicly, other than what I already pointed out. I hope I didn't miss anything. I can't wait to see what kind of feedback you get from everyone! :D *hugs* You did an amazing job with this!

[blacklid]

I'm gonna unlock it now.

I did all the edits you gave me during this read-thru and fixed a few other structures that were clumsy. The whole point was to have it be a cliffhanger (just in case it DID come back)... so I'm not sure that a sequel would work.

I'm so glad you liked it! :)

[lila_blue_b]

Well, you did a cliffhanger that made me want to shake my computer monitor. So... at least think about a sequel...

[blacklid]

A prologue, perhaps? :)

[pie_andcoffee]

hi baby girl... i had to come & copy & paste the pics because for some reason they just would not display in the doc you sent. just blank places. it's fine. i've got them all now and am printing it all out LIEK WHOA.

I LOVE YOU... YOU SHOULD HAVE BEEN AT THE POOL WITH ME THIS AFTERNOON. IT WAS BEAUTIFUL. I HAVE A TEENSY BIT OF SUNBURN. HEE.

[lila_blue_b]

Sunblock next time! :D

[blacklid]

I was there in spirit, 100%. :)

[certainthings]

Holy crap, that was amazing.

[blacklid]

Thank you for reading it! You made me smile.

[iyalode]

Oh wow. Great story thoroughly enjoyed it, the music and pictures were a lovely added bonus. Well done.

[blacklid]

Thank you for letting me know! I'm really glad you liked it. :)

[a_phoenixdragon]

My god, YESYESYESTESYES!!!

More, more more!!

*Whimpers*

*Clutches at you*

This was marvelous!! Fantastic!! Where do you come up with these things?!

*Clings*

*Cries*

*Hugs you close*

[blacklid]

But that's where it ends! :)
You don't need me to tell you how it's all gonna turn out. We know what those boys can do! LOL

I'm REALLY glad you liked it. I was just wondering the other day if anyone was still enjoying this...

[a_phoenixdragon]

Dammit!! I thought so, but I was still holding out hope!

Yeah, they are freaking awesome!

Took me awhile to get to it, but MAN was it soooo worth the long wait!! Gads!!!

*Smishes*

[blacklid]

*chuckle