Footie RPS Ficlet: Asmodeus (Arjen/Ronnie, R)

[blackdracaena]

Asmodeus
by ~Dracaena~

Disclaimer: Obviously this has never happened!

Rating: R
Warnings: None
Pairing: Arjen Robben/Cristiano Ronaldo

Summary: Football meets fantasy or from where some players got their talents.

Author's Note:
This is UNBETAED so there are most likely spelling mistakes, bad grammar and missing words.

For the 7_deadly_sins_ challenge (

Comments

[unitedforever]

Wow. I honestly have no words for this. This was perfect from start to finish. Such an interesting angle to start off from and I have a penchant for fics that aren't clichéd. I love the way you have included all those RL things, like Ronnie's youth and the rape charges. And the description of the demon is so realistic. Also Ronnie's emotional turmoil is so spot-on. I love when you get inside the thoughts and feelings of characters.

I don't know what else to say, really. Apart from you taking up this deadly sins challenge was a brilliant idea!

[blackdracaena]

You think it's not clichéd? *giggles* I think it is, through and through in a way but still there was something about this old conception I just liked.

I am so so happy about your feedback because it's one of the very few fics that I somewhat like myself, and we all know that often if you like something yourself others hate it.

And while I don't believe in the bible and it's god, I am sure should demons exists Asmodeus might have my name on his list for giving him some sense of humour. ;)

Thank you so so much for your feedback and I am really really happy that you like this fic. Whee! *hugs*

[unitedforever]

Maybe there have been tons of stories written about it, I don't know, but in terms of fic I have never seen anything like it. Might be me and my lack of experience, though. ;)

Yes! So true. And that's always a disappointment, if you like it so much yourself. Certainly won't be the case here, though. *g*

[carla_g]

ai! i love it))))
i can't imagine that it might end like this. no, really)))) and i like ronnie here. he's so cute after all.
thank you!

[blackdracaena]

hee. *smiles*
I am glad to hear you like this one so much.

Hm, but it did end like this... or maybe it didn't? *winks* Nah, I am not going to write a sequel to this but there will be more of demons and such for the other challenge ficlets. *grins*

Thanks a lot for the feedback. :D

[niamh_x]

Oh my god, this is amazing! The ending, with Arjen and Lucifer? I literally went 'OMG!' and clapped a hand over my mouth :-) Awesome stuff! -loves it muchly-

[blackdracaena]

Ummm... *blushes* It really makes me happy that you think it's that good. I mean I had fun writing and researching for it and I did like it but usually that means people hate it. So your feedback makes me smile all over. There will be more of Lucifer... after all he is the demon of pride. *grins*

Thanks so much for your feedback, really it's so so much appreciated. *beams*

[niamh_x]

Yus, it was excellent, I enjoyed it muchly! It's great fun researching for fics too, I can imagine a fic like the seven deadly sins would make for some brilliant websites and stuff to read :-)

-looks forward to more fic!-

-hugs-

[leetje]

omgsogood! *loves* Really :D

The way you explained in this how certain RL stuff had happened, brilliant! And aw, the boys.

Loved the ending, wonderful twist, hee!

[blackdracaena]

hee! Oh darling! *glomps*

It means the world to me that you think it's good. I wasn't sure if I went over the top with it, so it's a big relief to hear you like it. *beams*

Yup, told you had to get rid of the KNIGHT IN SHINING ARMOR, well he is still there in a way but different. ;)

[thewayforwards]

Oh, this is absolutely brilliant. I knew it would be great from the moment you began telling me about it but it was better than I thought, even.

I really love what you're doing with this challenge, it's brilliant. The ending completely took my surprise and this is just enough Knight In Shining Armor *nodnod* in the best kind of way.

Lovely, my darling, absolutely lovely.

[blackdracaena]

*beams* You think it's brilliant? hee. Really, I am so happy you like it too. I am never sure with half crossovers between reality and fantasy, I liked it but then again that doesn't mean much.

I am happy to hear it wasn't so obvious what I had planned for the ending. And I am pondering of having Lucifer return, somehow I need to because the prompt for pride will be named Lucifer. Ah well, we will see.

*hugs* Thank you getting feedback from you is always so so so good. hee.