Footie RPS Ficlet: Dying Inside (Arjen/Ronnie, G)

[blackdracaena]

Dying Inside
by ~Dracaena~

Disclaimer: Obviously this has never happened!

Rating: G
Warnings: I guess it's still DEATHFIC if someone has already died?
Pairing: Arjen Robben/Cristiano Ronaldo
Archive: NONE

Summary: This must be what dying inside feels like.

Author's Note:
Big big thankies to chimera_negra for the beta

Comments

[fly_meaway]

Ohhh that is so beautiful. Painfully beautiful. I love your flow in this piece, hun, the flow of the sentences and the way you sometimes just really capture that emotion. So incredibly well. I love it, though yeah, it does make me sad (but that's good by the way)...

[blackdracaena]

*smiles* I am happy to hear you liked it. I had a tough time writing it, crying and writing doesn't work really well. And I am never sure about capturing emotions so I am very happy to hear you think I did in this. Phew. *hugs*

[kniggit_slash]

I know I have told you many times how good of a writer you are but I stand corrected. You are brillant.

I have never been touched so deeping by any fic in my life! God, your power with words. This is tragic and heartbreaking and rips into my soul.

I can't even stop crying. You amaze me and I hope that this helped you.

Also, if you want to come online, I have something for you.

[blackdracaena]

I am not brilliant! *shakes head*
However I am glad you like the stuff I produce. *smiles*

I was thinking of you when I wrote it because you recently left me feedback on the other deathfic I wrote. Was wondering how you would take it if I kill Ronnie off. *meeps*

And I have your animal icons ready. Shall send them to you by email. *hugs*

[niamh_x]

My throat has a lump in it right now :'-(

Beautifully, beautifully done...

"he buries his face into his pillow. This time in the hope of smelling him but while the room still held traces of his scent, the pillow only smells of some soapy washing detergent."

That stabbed my heart, it really did. Ouch. :'-(

-sigh- fantastic!

[blackdracaena]

Meep!

I am glad you think it's beautifully done. Was tough to write. I am never sure if I can get emotions across.

Thanks so much for your feedback. *hugs*

[niamh_x]

No problem :-)

I can imagine a fic like this would be incredibly difficult to write - you're brave, 'cos there's no way I could do it! You got the emotions across perfectly :-)

-hugs you back-

[leetje]

*sobs* no words. you killed me too.

[blackdracaena]

*meeps* *clings* *sobs*

[unitedforever]

I often have trouble with deathfics and this confirms why. Because they hurt so damn much. :( Only if they're well-written, though, and this was bloody amazing. The raw emotion of it. That must be what it feels like.

I really hope it helped in some way. *hugs*

[blackdracaena]

I also have trouble with reading deathfic if it's well done because it fucking hurts. I am very happy to hear you think mine was well done.

It helped in a way, but I still cried my eyes out that night. *hugs back*

[unitedforever]

I know. Trust me when I say I know exactly how you feel. You'll get over it, but it does take some time.