Footie RPS Ficlet: Inside My Heart (Ronnie/Arjen, PG)

[blackdracaena]

Inside My Heart
by ~Dracaena~

Disclaimer: Obviously this has never happened!

Rating: PG
Pairing: Cristiano Ronaldo/Arjen Robben
Feedback: Yes, please.

Summary: Arjen crossed a line he shouldn't have and now he's dreading Cristiano's return.

Author's Note:
This is based on Ronnie/Arjen from the RPG theinsidestoryThere is Dutch dialogue in it but it still

Comments

[fly_meaway]

Ahhh...
so so cute :D

Oh and first things first; glad to see you back on lj again. I meant to comment earlier on your two previous posts, but somehow end up not doing it.

and he had stopped counting the times he had felt the sensation of the cool metal against his naked skin as Cristiano’s wrist had brushed over his body.

Such a great sentence. I love it, really love it.
This story is so cute and sweet and I love the Dutch sentences. Really made me laugh and I could totally hear him saying it. Soo soo cute.

Great writing again :D

[blackdracaena]

Hee! Thank you for the lovely feedback.
Always brings a smile to my face and in this case I was beaming when I read your comment. *cuddles*

Tell you what that sentence is my favorite in this ficlet.
Mhmmm yes... *winks*

And more heeee as you like the idea of Ronnie speaking Dutch.
I thought it would be cute to have him learn it because of Arjen and it was Leetje's idea to not have him speak in perfect Dutch. Made it even more adorable. *pets him*

Really really happy you like this. :D

[corduroy_mouse]

It's fab, sweetie :D *cuddles*

[blackdracaena]

Heee! *smooches*
Thank you so much for beta-ing it.
And why didn't you tell me I had a type on your name link.
Have fixed it now!
*cuddles you again*

[magull]

*adoring sigh* Soooo cute! *pets the boys*

And wah, DUTCH! *licks sentences* *purrs*

*loves you for writing so wonderfully*

I've been all sad since I came home from the stables today, but this really cheered me up. *smooches*

[blackdracaena]

*smiles*
So glad you like and so happy for cheering you up.
*smooches*
*pets the boys too*
Now we need to bug Leen into writing Ronnie's POV of this.
*nods* ;)

[blackdracaena]

*blinks* You do?

I thought you might not have liked it as you didn't comment on the post where I announced the new layout.

And it's funny... I do go to yours to ogle your Ronnie header all the time. :D
*hugs*

[blackdracaena]

You have no idea... I must have tried 50 different colors and none of them fit. I was getting frustrated thinking I would never find colors that would suit the header. I wanted to have blue and I adored your color scheme but when I tried the colors I actually wanted it sucked. So I went back and picked red/pastell again.

I had hoped you just missed it because that day you left comments in various other journals and I was like "But but but... does it suck so much it's not worth commenting." So I'm really happy and relieved to hear you like it. Phew! *cuddles*

[carla_g]

oh, i've just noticed this!!! how could i have missed your fic?! shame on me!
i really love it. it's so sweet. it actually makes me believe that ronnie/arjen can be a good pair! you wrote it so well. i need to read it again.

[blackdracaena]

Hee! Thank you, glad to hear you like it.
But you need to go and read leetje's companion piece.
It's so gorgeous puts mine to shame. *hugs*

[carla_g]

*hugs back and goes to read*