Lipsology

Dec 07, 2011 19:43

Title: Lipsology
Pairing: Jonghyun x Onew
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: Romance, Humour

“Then let me read your lips. Lips are more precise than palms” )

jongyu, jonghyun/onew, pg-13

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midnight808 December 7 2011, 20:27:16 UTC
haha i love stalker Jjong, he is so cute. Jinki how could you not know that Kibum wasbehind all this, it was so obvious.

Anyway, i cant wait for the next chapter.

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black_wind123 December 10 2011, 10:56:31 UTC
LOL, I know right?! Thanks for the comment!! <3

what next chapter? o.O there's no next chapter.... *runs*

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midnight808 December 11 2011, 17:00:34 UTC
T-T why is this a one-shot , it could be an awesome chaptred fanfic

Alright i will settle for your other chaptred fic then T.T.

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black_wind123 December 14 2011, 14:15:00 UTC
Aw, I'm really sorry. But because many people requested a sequel for this, I might consider it. :)

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hokkaido_kiss December 7 2011, 21:45:01 UTC
aww. yess. stalker jjong is adorable and it's cut how jinki is so gullible. i figured out it was jonghyun when he told about the drunken sex~ cute story ^^

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black_wind123 December 10 2011, 10:57:50 UTC
I guess everyone knew who it was. Well, except for Jinki. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting!! :] <3

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thpeekaboo December 8 2011, 03:04:36 UTC
After a second Kibum's head poked back in.

“You're a sad being, Jonghyun”, he says pulling out a disgusted face and ran away to catch up with his best friend.

Kibum ah, that sad being is gonna go out with your best-friend soon XDDD but omg this fic is soooooo cute xD i bet jinki must be pretty freaked out when his one night stand incident got pulled out --- jinki ah, please know that it's jjong because really xD Palm reader doesn't see s*x LOL xD.

so, not only we've stalker!jjong but also clothes-stealing!jjong too over here ! XDDD <3

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black_wind123 December 10 2011, 11:17:29 UTC
THANK YOUU!! ;_; <3 <3 <3

LOL, our Jinki is too naive to realize that. (OMG his birthday is coming up soon!!!! >_____< <3 )

Haha, Jonghyun is Jonghyun no matter whatever he does.

Thanks again bb. Your comments are always loved :3 <3

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thpeekaboo December 10 2011, 15:33:23 UTC
YOU'RE WELCOME :B awesome fic needs a comment! XD

--- of course, xD Jinki is just too pure for his own good LOL (ikr!?!? ;___; but i'm going overseas so i'm gonna miss it T_____T)
LOL stalkerish jjong did lots to see jinki again xD

:B i'm glad my comments are loved! XD As an author I do know comments are the writers' biggest boost so i tend to leave them (though i tend to get lazy at times) XD hope mine encouraged you! <3 XDD

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black_wind123 December 11 2011, 15:01:17 UTC
That's too nice of you to say that. :3

Aw, I was expecting a fic from you. :PP Ah, life can be a bitch sometimes. SHINee was like two hours away from my house in November and I flippin couldn't even go to see them cause there were no tickets left for me! >___<

Have I ever told you that you're like one of my favourite JongYu authors? (and no I'm not just saying that. I don't do that kind of stuff -.- ) So I always feel really happy when you leave comments on my fics. And of course, they do encourage me ALOT! :] <3

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trinkdufreak December 8 2011, 04:42:06 UTC
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
ooooohhh i just knew it was jonghyun! that sexy blonde stalker!!
keekee
this was cute and of course i loooove it!
*fan sign*
you never fail to amaze!

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black_wind123 December 10 2011, 11:21:18 UTC
YOU'RE FLATTERING ME!!! """ But I'm glad you like it :3 <3 <3 <3

(you haven't abandoned your fic have you? o.O)

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trinkdufreak December 11 2011, 01:01:19 UTC
psh I will always be here to flatter you ;D

nooo i have not abandoned it, I am just under alot of pressure with my semester finals right now.
i SHOULD be writing my essay at the moment...but...LJ calls to me like a smexy man in a bed >///< jk jk!
but seriuosly, work to do. all I have been doing is checking ma emails for comments and stuff, and when i take a break from studying i read a few fics *guilty*
in summary:
school is a bitch =.=
but i will do ma best to update asap!!!

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black_wind123 December 11 2011, 14:33:56 UTC
THANK YOUU!!!

I'm the kind of person who leaves all the work for the last moment XD *nods shamelessly* I know how you feel so don't worry. Who the hell invented essays man? Essays should just die and rot in hell forever! Freakin essays! X( Ah school, I sort of miss it now. Wait, so how old are you? o.O

Yesyesyes!! Update soon! And don't forget to save me a spot when you do!

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ziazahra December 8 2011, 10:37:05 UTC
I'll tell you when I figured out it was Jonghyun.

“I don't want any nuisance interrupting me when I'm with you”

When I read this I was like, OMG this person is totally Jjong.

“Where does it say that?” Jinki brings his palm to his face.

Aww Jinki bb, why are so adorable??

“Then let me read your lips. Lips are more precise than palms”, confided the voice behind the dark hood.

LOL you couldn't control yourself when Jinki licked his lips could you Jjong? :P

“Come a little closer”, the man breathed. And I'm like I know what you're doing Jjong!! :D I've gotta say, that line was kinda hot o.o It reminded me of that 2PM song 'All Night Long'

“I'm seeing you again?”

“You're definitely seeing me again”, he says with a slight laugh.

LOLOLOLOL!! That's right Jinki. He's going to be your boyfriend XDDD

“Hey Kibum! Thanks for letting me touch him.” Jonghyun shouted, grinning madly and taking off the hideous costume he was in. “I think I'm going to have beautiful dreams today”JONGHYUN YOU PERV!!!! X'DDD The last line cracked me up ( ... )

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black_wind123 December 10 2011, 11:28:42 UTC
ZOMGGGG!!!!! I'm dying over here!! I LOVEEE THAT SMILE OF HIS!!!! *squeeeals* Why the heck's he so perfect?? >__<

Aww... your comments make me smile :) And so does your gifs! Oh yeah, I was going to put humour as the genre too but then I myself didn't think it was that funny. Weird :/ But I'll do it anyway.

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