Fic: Waypoint Chlark - The R Section - 7 of 9

[black_panda_ops]

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Warning, this is the R section, for sexuality. If you are not of age, or don't like that sort of thing, see you tomorrow.

"Maybe we could say good-bye." What was that supposed to mean? She said it as if it were a euphemism for something. Wait. Did she mean what he thought she meant? He looked at her

Comments

[angelbsb]

whoa that was hot. i loved how you worte that. the way they were comforting each other was great keep it up . :D

[black_panda_ops]

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.

[simplytoopretty]

Sex done for all the wrong reasons is hot and sad at the same time. Because really Chloe isn't au!Clark's Chloe and au!Clark is the Chloe's Clark. So really this way of "saying goodbye" is probably not a good idea, but I guess people rarely make wise decisions when it's their hearts guiding them. I loved this chapter because it seems very realistic as to what 2 people in their situation might do, but the ramifications of it all seem to be huge.

[black_panda_ops]

Yeah, smart or foolish, comfort or torment I'm not sure.

I would have done it though.

[blackheart_me]

I love how your describing their kiss. So tentative and the way they hold their breath until their lips touch against one another. It just gives me the feeling and the heart racing emotion. It's so sweet! ;] *ROTFL* Such a heated moment. She's about to take off his shirt and his costume gets in the way. Instead of getting rid of that first, she goes for questions. That cracked me up. So Chloe. "Oh! We are so doing this! I just think you might like it better if I didn’t fry you." HAHAHAHA! I love this answer! and I love the reaction she gives him :D. AWW THIS IS JUST TOO CUTE! I love that she's giggling at him, and for his costume not for his "equipment" ;]. "It might the only time." Oh if only she could stay...Oh this was so beautiful and sexy. I loved it!

[black_panda_ops]

Delighted you enjoyed it. I figure if your going to do Superman, do Superman.

[cheerful_earl]

Aw. This is so sad and moving. I feel so bad for AU!Clark, who will be left alone when Chloe goes back. And of course for Chloe, who will have to deal with Clana (but let's hope that doesn't last...).

Also, you wrote the sex very well. I can't write that stuff at all, so I admire you for being able to bring the heat.

[black_panda_ops]

Thanks again. When you get to pitying Clark, just remember, he still has Jimmy.

It was the first smut I've ever written, though heaven knows I've read plenty. It was very odd writng it.

[babydee1]

Whoa. Sizzlin' hot.

There is NO way he's letting her go after this. If he does, then he's a bigger BDA than I thought!

Great chapter. Brilliant smut; hot, yet tender at the same time.

Nicely done!

[black_panda_ops]

This was the first comment I saw this morning. Since it's been like a year since I wrote this, I had totally forgotten about this fic. That and I wasn't awake. I was like Whoa, Hot! This girl must like polls a LOT. This makes more sense though...

[babydee1]

I don't know how I missed this fic. Elly recced it a while back, and I had it bookmarked, but I've been so busy writing Wounded Heart that my fic-reading time has taken a hit.

But it was totally worth it taking the time to read this one. You're a great writer, BP - the characterisations were spot on!

[black_panda_ops]

Well thanks for all the positive feedback. Yeah this was my first official fan fic, though I did a few short scenarios on the TWOP 101 ways threads, and I've beta read before. I too have not been reading a lot of fic lately. For me though it's because the show just frustrates me. I'm so irritated with all the characters right now.