Love/Hate/Love

[black_magnolias]

Fandom: House on Haunted Hill
Pairing: Evelyn Price/Steven Price
Summary: A little bit of marital almost-bliss 
Warnings: pretty much PWOP

“Well, at least you’re letting me have the damn party,” Evelyn called from the bathroom, folding a cotton ball over her fingernail and leaning in to remove her eyeliner.

“You know how I am, sweetheart,” he spat from

Comments

[vseverinsevier]

Bloody...hell...

I think you got Stephen and Evelyn perfect, mate. I could actually hear them say the dialogue. It's...BRILLIANT!

*thinks of Guinness Draft commercial*

[texxy_girl]

Beautifully done, you have both the twisted pair down pat. You are quite a writer. Thanks for posting this story, a needed a little smut today.

[rushysgirl]

*growl* Those two are twisted, but HOT! You wrote the sick couple brilliantly.

[scarlett_0]

Deeeelicious!!!

[mooncove]

That was great! Great writing, you got the characters down, and it was HOT and funny at the same time. (I didn't even know I liked that movie so much!) Loved this exchange:

“Fine. But I’m on top” ...

“Princess?” he asked against her mouth.

“Yes?”

“Like hell you are.”

lol ... "Yes, Daddy." :)