A Forever Thing

[black_k_kat]

Rating: Hard R to NC-17
Word count: ~ 4,000
Warnings: AU, angst to the nth degree, sex, emotions, etc.
Disclaimer: All recognizable characters are the property of their respective owners. I am in no way associated with the creators, and no copyright infringement is intended.
Summary: They call the first one the Naïvety Marriage, the second the

Comments

[remydesire]

This is so heart wrenching. It's surprising the bitterness didn't keep them apart.

[bluelilacs]

Sometimes it's difficult to understand why a couple just keeps trying when there seems to be no chance at all they'll ever be able to make it work. It's heartbreaking to see the pain they end up inflicting on each other in the name of love, especially when each beginning happens without the mess from the past being cleaned up first.

[lone_star_woman]

Wow. This is painful and heartbreaking. It's so sad that they're caught in this vicious cycle, which could probably be broken if they would talk and try to understand each other. As much as I want them to work things out, I'm not sure it will happen.

Gonna run off and cry now. Good fic.

[wanda1969]

Heartbreaking but beautiful and compelling. Let's hope they DO keep on trying... and get it right.

[nightingale_r3]

That was so bitter-sweet story, loved it!