lapis lazuli (Part One)

[black_k_kat]

Rating: T
Warnings: Blood, badly written fight scenes, Ianto-angst, incredibly crackish premise, author writing under the influence of painkillers.
Word Count: ~4500 (this part), ~18000 overall
Summary: Witches walk the human world in secret, just out of sight and mind. Ianto Jones never reached Lisa Hallett’s side in time to save her, but he comes

Comments

[badly_knitted]

Loving this so far, can't wait for the next part.

Once again, you've created a thoroughly entralling world, full of magic and mystery and secret agendas. Poor Ianto, he'll carry on trying to save Lisa regardless of the cost, even though he knows deep down that it's hopeless.

[fiwen1010]

I am always delighted to see that you're still alive :P (Although I hope that the need for painkillers is nothing too severe)

You've done it again, though. Your world-building is always so detailed without being shoved down our throats, your characterisation is gorgeous, and the affection Jack and Ianto show to each other is so warm. It's all very lovely, and I can't wait to see more.

[sammydragoncat]

Loved the begging - Poor Ianto, trying to get Lisa back is not going to end well.

[bluelilacs]

Very interesting start.

I'm afraid Ianto is lying to himself about the possibility of getting Lisa back. He wants it so badly that he can't allow himself to admit it's probably not possible. I hope he sees reason before it's too late and he destroys the life he has at TW Three with Jack.

[katwillow]

As I have come to expect from your beautifully imagined writing I am now sitting on top of a mountain waiting in happy anticipating the next chapter.