Comments | black_eyedgirl: First Kiss FF: West Wing crossover ficlets [Heroes/West Wing, Dr Who/West Wing; PG-13]

black_eyedgirl

First Kiss FF: West Wing crossover ficlets [Heroes/West Wing, Dr Who/West Wing; PG-13]

Sep 17, 2008 05:01

I may write some more of these tomorrow, because a few of them were quite rushed. And they're all shorter than the Entourage one :( It's just that I love new fandoms so much!

Title: Censor
Fandom: Heroes/West Wing
AN: Elle/Toby, for thecolourclear
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fanfic: drabbles/shorts, heroes, west wing, west wing: fanfic, sorkinverses, fanfic, heroes: fanfic, fanfic: to order, fanfic: crossover, dr who, dr who: fanfic, whoverse

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part 1 raedbard September 23 2008, 23:45:27 UTC

I fail at feedback. Forgive me?

All three of these are just ... gnnnghhh. Just when I think you can't hit me over the head with any more pretty, there it goes. :D

ELLE AND TOBY. Ohhh, jaysus. Is that not the prettiest thing? First of all. ;)

Elle likes Toby. She likes the way he punches, and the way he stops.
That second sentence is so powerful ... I don't know why, exactly. Possibly because it says exactly what needs to be said; what Elle would think, being a girl who notices things like the quality of a guy's left hook. <3 (It's also very sexy in a way I equally don't understand!)

Mostly, though, she likes the way he says her name. Quiet, like it means something different. “Elle.”
Mmmm, Toby!voice. *nods* This too. I can *hear* him. *shivers*

She sits down on the bed beside him. “I don’t. But you glare less when they win.”
See, I don't usually like the whole flirts-like-a-little-girl-with-her-daddy thing because of the squick factor, but with her ... it works. And you got me there in one line. Gah. I kinda adore her.

It folds ( ... )

and pt 2 raedbard September 23 2008, 23:45:43 UTC

And and and, *Martha* and Sam. Oyyy. Those two would get on, I think. Martha would keep Sam in the real world, and Sam would make Martha all starry-eyed again, but without the unhappy ending. Or good friends anyway. Eeeee! *squishes*

acting as a bodyguard to the Deputy Chief of Staff for President Santos. He’s making it difficult for her. Mostly because he keeps talking to her.
Hee! :D I love how they talk to each other. Sam's not learnt his lesson from Winifred, evidently. ;)

Sam Seaborn has the kind of smile that would melt the hardest of hearts, and Martha’s wasn’t even close to that. She says, “Sam.”
YAY! :D

Bartlet always had a strange relationship with his detail, because of the shooting at Rosslyn, and because of his daughter.
*hand over heart*

“Well, I’m pretty good at my job, actually.”
“I can see that.”
Oh, I miss my Martha Jones. <3

He laughs. “To tell you the truth, I had my suspicions aroused a while back.” He takes a white monogrammed handkerchief from his pocket, and she hadn’t known men still had those. He hands ( ... )