Comments | black_eyedgirl: House MD FF: Transference 4&5/9 (House/Chase, R)

black_eyedgirl

House MD FF: Transference 4&5/9 (House/Chase, R)

Dec 21, 2005 19:43

Title: Transference 4&5/9
Fandom: House, MD
Pairing: House/Chase
Rating: R for violence, domestic abuse, allusions of rape.
Genre: Angst/Drama
Length: These parts - 1,900 words
Disclaimer: House and all its characters are, sadly, not mine.
Summary: But Chase was a grown man, however stupidly childlike he looked wandering around barefoot and bruised.

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black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 03:25:38 UTC

Glad you still like!

Wonderful. anonymous December 21 2005, 20:23:22 UTC

Yay! New chapters... Been waiting around for this one for a while, I might add. But I do enjoy reading your House-voice; good snarking there. Interesting how he reads Chase like an open book, but can't figure out what to do with him.

And Chase... What a delightful puzzle he is. One of the more complex characters on the show, so I'm glad writers like you explore that thoroughly in stories like this.

Hope the next one is up soon! :)

forensicxjunkie December 21 2005, 20:29:37 UTC

*wibble* um. wow. more. *grovels*

black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 03:26:16 UTC

More soon, no grovelling needed. Though feedback is always an incentive, so thanks for that ;-)

liberateourtime December 21 2005, 21:04:51 UTC

I like this.

Can you link me to the earlier chapters so I can understand what's going on? XD

black_eyedgirl December 22 2005, 10:11:09 UTC

(From the beginning...)

They should all link to each other, so that should do it. If it *doesn't*, they're all in memories as well. Glad you liked what you read, even if I'm sure it made little sense!

jamie_dakin December 21 2005, 21:07:52 UTC

Been following this for a while now and so first I will apologize for not commenting earlier and then fall to my virtual knees and beg for the next installment.
It's brilliantly written and I absolutely *love* the tone and rhythm of the plot (speaking of which - plot. And a fantastic plot at that. I mean, I don't think that I've read actual plot in any slash fic since June maybe).

Damaged Chase was a fun enough toy, but broken beyond use would only make him feel guilty, and guilt was his least favourite of all the emotions.
- Dude, are you sure you're not actually part of the House writing team?

black_eyedgirl January 1 2006, 03:30:23 UTC

Entirely forgiven for not commenting sooner when you leave feedback like that. :-)

I was so convinced that this was getting plot-lite, so thanks for saying that it isn't! I was getting worried about becoming one a cliche of a slash-writer whose writing just looks like an attempt to get to the next sex scene. And as I don't *write* that many sex-scenes, that would be a little problematic...

"Dude, are you sure you're not actually part of the House writing team?"
*glows*