Comments | black_eyedgirl: House MD FF: Transference 2/9 (House/Chase, R)

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House MD FF: Transference 2/9 (House/Chase, R)

Nov 29, 2005 14:18

Title: Transference 2/9
Fandom: House, MD
Pairing: House/Chase
Rating: R for violence, domestic abuse, allusions of rape.
Genre: Angst/Drama
Length: This part - 1,400 words.
Disclaimer: House and all its characters are, sadly, not mine.
Summary: ‘‘Chase!’ House shouted. Later, playing it back, he would hear the panic in his voice, although he wasn’t ( Read more... )

house md, house md: transference series, house md: fanfic, fanfic

Comments 42

amproof November 29 2005, 14:51:32 UTC

You cannot stop it there!! (Ok, clearly you can and did, but still...) *stamps foot*

black_eyedgirl November 29 2005, 20:44:11 UTC

Sorry! I needed a break, and that seemed like a good place to stop, honest? Next chapter soon, it's betaed and everything... Glad you're enjoying!

amproof November 29 2005, 21:06:12 UTC

You just made my day.

*sits and waits*

black_eyedgirl November 29 2005, 21:43:00 UTC

Umm... soon, but not today.... *feels guilty about you sitting in front of the computer waiting* Though I can give you an oh-so-sneaky sneak preview from Chapter 3....

‘Oh, we’re through with this whole “this is none of your business” crap. You don’t make it into work, it’s my business. That was our agreement. Or, to be more accurate, that was what you yelled as you stormed out of the office.

Does that help? *hopeful smile* More in a few days...

serafina20 November 29 2005, 15:02:42 UTC

This is good. I love your House voice. Can't wait for you to continue. :)

black_eyedgirl November 29 2005, 20:44:59 UTC

So glad my House voice comes across okay! Thanks for commenting, and I'm glad you like it.

cordeliadelayne November 29 2005, 15:04:03 UTC

Ooh, I'm intrigued and really enjoying this. Your House is very well-written.

black_eyedgirl November 29 2005, 20:46:02 UTC

Thanks very much for both being intrigued and thinking my House is well-written because he troubles me so... Glad you like!

almightychrissy November 29 2005, 15:17:58 UTC

omg chaaaase *weeps* I am going to be watching all of today's episode cooing "oh chase, did someone lock you in the closet, sweetie?"

Though I guess he can be glad it was a walkin and not one of those tiny ones because that would be way worse.

black_eyedgirl November 29 2005, 20:49:04 UTC

Lol. Awww.... sorry, I'll let him out, I promise! (Plus, at least you *have* a House episode today. Cursed UK televison...) I do feel really bad when I write him getting hurt. Presumably because I'm a crazy person who has difficulty identifying the difference between reality and TV...

And a tiny closet *would* be worse, which is why it's a walk-in - I was afraid I was being too melodramatic already!

kaciagemini November 29 2005, 15:29:31 UTC

More, more, more! ...please?
*sigh* Now I'm never going to be able to concentrate in class today.

black_eyedgirl November 29 2005, 20:50:58 UTC

:-) Know the feeling. I decided that posting this was really more important than the essay I was writing so goodness knows what my tutor'll think of me. But then I have been known to get bored in lectures and write fanfic instead, so perhaps he won't notice the difference!

More soon, I promise!