Entourage FF: "Slightly more complicated than that" [Ari, Eric/Vince; R; AU]

Jul 31, 2009 01:45

Title: Slightly more complicated than that
Fandom: Entourage
Characters/Pairing: Ari POV, Eric/Vince, everybody else (some canon het)
Rating/Warnings: R/NC-17 (lots of swearing, implied sex but nothing on screen. Pot-smoking, some drinking, gambling. Past imprisonment.)
Length: 10,700 words
Disclaimer: All belongs to Doug Ellin and HBO.
Spoilers: ( Read more... )

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gracepoetic July 31 2009, 03:19:38 UTC
This was a really fun story, I enjoyed it! It had Ari as his usual self, sweet Lloyd, mystery and intrigue, crazy Billy and best of all Vince/Eric love.

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coyotesuspect July 31 2009, 04:16:42 UTC
I love this. You've combine two of my favorite things (cons and Entourage), and the result is wonderful. The pacing was great, the dialogue was sharp, and the characterizations were all spot on. Fantastic.

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dancinbutterfly July 31 2009, 06:47:45 UTC
*sigh* I love it so damn much. Seriously, so much. Thank you for your contribution to the fest. Thank you so much. You dont even know how great it is to see your work here. And that it's brilliant is an extra bonus.

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ceares July 31 2009, 17:43:28 UTC
*squee!* OMG! That was perfect--fun and slick and romantic and wonderfully cast in character. Loved it! So many perfect lines, like this But Vince cheats with every part of him: his expression and every inch of his body language is a lie and this "...he talks the grey-man talk.” Really, really glad you wrote this--I can scratch it off my list of things to write*g* and fulfill my craving wonderfully be rereading this with glee.

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jiainjj July 31 2009, 18:18:57 UTC
I love this story.

Although it's AU, but you still manage to make the characters sound like the one I saw in the TV.

The love between Vince and Eric is so lovely.I love this line:
I lost what I love best for two years because of you. Learn to deal.

And when I read this:“Nobody ever worries about traumatising me,” Turtle says, without any particular venom. “Now can we smoke the fucking weed?” I can imagine the scene in my mind.

Thank you for sharing.

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