New Wee!cest fic!

[bksncleverfic]

Title: Fever
Author: bksncleverness
Word Count: somewhere in the 5500 range, I think.
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Rating: R
Warnings: wee!cest; Sam is 14, Dean is 18
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my smutty imagination.
Summary: Sam's sick when Dad's away. Dean takes care of him.
Notes: This is a story I wrote for mooncharm forever ago. I can't even remember why I wrote it except

Comments

[titti]

This is so beautiful. Really amazing. The ending is really the best part, because there is so much foreshadowing and it's so true, Dean would do anything.

You're fantastic.

[bksncleverfic]

YAY! Thank you for reading! I'm glad that you liked it. And I was going to go more into the smut, but I think it's better ending here. With the foreshadowing.

*Sigh* I love them.

[rafikiven]

OK, for the record, wincest is totally not my thing, but I have to say you did a great job in this story. And...yowza.

[bksncleverfic]

Thank you! I appreciate that you even opened it, if Wincest isn't your thing.

Thanks for taking the chance and for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[bksncleverfic]

You are so kind to me. I'm so happy you liked this. It felt really canon to me when I was writing. It was almost like I just watched it unfold in my head and I wrote what I saw.

I'm really pleased that it was effective. I loved telling the story, and I'm very sure that you will find the words to write what you are writing.

We always do. Sometimes it just takes longer. If you're anything like me (and I think you are), you'll be affected by someone else's fic, but then you'll absorb it and your voice will re-emerge.

I'm going to read your stuff this weekend! w00t!

[annabeth]

“It’s not just you,” Sam says, so quietly Dean almost doesn’t hear him.

I love this line. It's so simple and yet perfect, and I love that Sam is smart enough to know what's going on and reassure Dean.

“It’s wrong,” Dean says weakly. “I want what’s wrong. And I can’t have it. I just have to deal, okay? It's not your problem.” He lays his head down on his arm and whispers: "I can't do that. Not to you."

I reread this little part about four times in rapid succession. I just couldn't move on right away, I had to savour the moment, the way Dean is so reluctant to do ANYTHING that might harm Sam, even to the point where he's denying Sam something he wants because he thinks it's a bad idea.

And then the end, Need you and help me echo through Dean's brain. Dean doesn't know if Sam knows that these are the words that could make Dean do anything. it's so absolutely true in canon, and I love that the way you showed it wasn't so much the puppy eyes (I'm guilty of using that in my own fic, lol) but the words Sam uses, and I might be

[bksncleverfic]

I also think Sam knew exactly what would convince Dean. He's a smart kid and he reads people well. It's his gift.

Thank you so much for reading! And for your thoughtful comments!!

And, you know, I wonder about which line to put as the cut so you telling me that the line I chose helped draw you in? That's very good information for me to know.

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

[mickeym]

This is absolutely gorgeous. The want and need and love that Dean has for Sam (and vice versa) left me aching for both of them. And Dean...god. I wanted to hug him, when he was crying with shame.

He'll take the consequences like a man, when they come, and they'll all be worth it.

That's the Dean who needs his brother. *sighs*

I really loved this. Thank you for sharing it with us.