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bksncleverfic

New drabble!

Feb 19, 2008 12:26

This one's for lexzilla. Hope you like!!

Title: The Kitten Made Them Realize
Author: bksncleverness
Word Count: ~870
Pairing: J2
Rating: Hard R
Notes: lexzilla asked for J2 with a kitten; sorry if this gets schmoopy. I wanted some lovey dovey bliss since Thursday's ep.

( Jared swore the hairball was bigger than the kitten who made it, the runt of a litter Jensen found huddling under the wooden porch of his rented house. )

drabbles, lexzilla, j2

Comments 15

mooncharm February 20 2008, 05:51:11 UTC

so this is pretty fucking adorable and schmooptastic, yes? yes! my two favorite bits though?

Jensen looked down at him, ran his fingers through Jared’s hair.

a perfect image, says so much. i dunno, maybe it's just me.

and this is how it will be when there’s a baby in the house

omg my heart actually fluttered at that i'm fuckin twitterpated, dude. sigh. so sweet, i'm such a whore for the sugar. :D

bksncleverfic February 20 2008, 20:03:27 UTC

I'm so glad it made your heart flutter. *giggles* S'like the best compliment ever!!

And I'm with you on the other line too. I don't know why, but it just painted the whole thing for me. Just seeing them like that with Jensen looking down wordlessly at Jay? It just makes the whole picture clear. I'm glad you thought so too. It's funny when you think of something when you write a particular line, and then a reader (albeit one who is so close to me) gets the exact thing you thought of when you wrote it. *snuggles* I love you.

lexzilla February 21 2008, 21:30:34 UTC

Oh! This was just adorable x infinity. I can't believe you made so much just out of the word kitten. Awesome.

“You are gonna make the cutest father when we...you know, like, someday. I mean, I thought I loved seeing you with my dogs, but this? This is like seeing you with a baby.” Meep. That's domesticated bliss going to the next level right there. And we got to see it.

Thank you so much.

bksncleverfic February 22 2008, 22:00:58 UTC

You are so welcome, darling.

I can't believe it went there, to that domestic bliss X 2 place, but I wanted them to be together and happy. Sam and Dean have too much angst. J2 can love each other til the cows come home.

YAY! You liked it!!

shinywhimsy February 23 2008, 20:29:09 UTC

Awwwwwwwww! This is so sweet and romantic and adorable and beautiful and and and *happy sigh* Perfect. *dreamy eyes*

bksncleverfic February 25 2008, 21:08:53 UTC

YAY!! Happy place. Glad you enjoyed.

They are too fecking cute together. I swear. Add two dogs and a kitten into the mix and there is serious diabetes happening.

adhyra_19 February 26 2008, 03:43:55 UTC

"But something was changing in the way they touched."

Oh my, I nearly melt after reading that line :)

And Jared taking a picture of Jen and his baby and asking where to post it... LOL!

So cute and so hot and so beautiful as the final part shed light into plans for the future... Perfect :))

popmusicjunkie March 19 2008, 23:26:26 UTC

That last paragraph made my heart do funny things.
Very cute schmoopy ficlet.

bksncleverfic March 20 2008, 00:27:14 UTC

Hee. I'm so glad about that!

I like making hearts flip flop almost as much as I like making blood rush to people's private places! Whee!