A Binding Fate: Chapter 10

Oct 30, 2007 19:26

I just wanted to take the time to say thank you to everyone who has been reading and leaving wonderful feedback! I know vampire stories are not for everyone, but I appreciate every one of you who gave this one a chance! This is the 10th and final chapter and I hope I've done the story justice.

A special Thank You goes out to stephmck! Thank you for the ( Read more... )

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lastglances October 30 2007, 23:39:20 UTC
damn, that was good! i think i'll reread the entire thing tomorrow while i'm curled up in bed with some candy.

i loved the drama and the atmosphere and the sex was pretty nice too! thanks for sharing this with us.

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tgray November 2 2007, 03:33:39 UTC
Brian, Justin and candy. Mmmm... Is there anything better? LOL.

Thank you for reading it!

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duffy_60 October 30 2007, 23:56:51 UTC
Well done!!

You succeeded in 10 chapters to wrap up a beautiful story. It was very moving and visceral and just -- well, just lovely.

Later,
Daphne

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tgray November 2 2007, 03:34:48 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm sad that it's over, but happy that it was well accepted!

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kari77 October 31 2007, 00:10:22 UTC
Wow! That last chapter raced by in a heartbeat ... so to speak.
What an utterly beautiful story. The tragedy and the love and your wonderful words.
It was a pleasure to read.

As I watch over him, waiting… I long for the rise and fall of his chest and his heartbeat so familiar to my ears. I am disturbed that the only sound to be heard is his silence. His future will take on a different path now, one that may or may not collide with mine. The only thing I am completely sure of… The choice will be his this time.
I started crying when I came across this paragraph. So powerful and heartbreaking.

Thanks so much for this story! :-)

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tgray November 2 2007, 03:38:09 UTC
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. Everyone who followed this story made it so enjoyable to write.

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anglluvr October 31 2007, 00:15:02 UTC
okay... i loved it!!!! great end.. :-) atleast cos in your story vampires dont automatically become mindless killing machines. brian and justin living together forever.. always young and always beautiful. there's something so perfect about that!!!

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tgray November 2 2007, 03:38:49 UTC
I can't imagine anything better! Brian and Justin forever... *sighs*

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camelhaircoat October 31 2007, 00:52:37 UTC
Ethan turning to dust? Works for me! Too bad he didn't take Mikey with him. And Season 5 Lindsay.

Such an awesome story, the suspense in this last chapter was wonderful. I'm so sad it's over. Thanks for this Halloween "treat." Can't wait to see what's next on your agenda. :)

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tgray November 2 2007, 03:40:26 UTC
Ethan turning to dust? Works for me! Too bad he didn't take Mikey with him. And Season 5 Lindsay. Bwahahaha!

Thank you so much for reading it! Not sure what's next, but there will definitely be something!

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