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Stalemate: Drabble by Sannea

Aug 04, 2007 20:34

Blond hair falls towards a tightened jaw while aimless strokes draw lines of disappointment and hurt on a sketchpad. The words “sex is a fucking weapon to you” still hanging even though the scent of anonymous sex has cleared from the air.

Brian sighs and stretches, bare feet softly padding across seasoned wood. Just a trick, didn’t mean ( Read more... )

sannea

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kari77 August 4 2007, 18:53:03 UTC

*shivers* This is so powerful, even so after reading it a second and third time.
And the title is perfect in all its meanings.

You did a great job with the drabbling. Thank you so much for this.

Love,
Kari

sannea August 5 2007, 15:36:47 UTC

Thank you Kari *smothers in kisses*

Well I couldn't have you thinking I'd abandon QAF could I? ;-)

Love,
Sannea

kari77 August 5 2007, 15:51:53 UTC

Well I couldn't have you thinking I'd abandon QAF could I? ;-)
And I'm more than glad, because it would be a terrible loss for the fandom (and me).

*hugs*

(I have to admit, though, a bit of straying is refreshing sometimes. ;-) )

herefordroad August 4 2007, 20:16:01 UTC

you've sensitively written and demonstrated the terrible lack of verbal communication between brian and justin. brian's thought brings it home:

"Just a trick, didn’t mean anything"

great drabble.

sannea August 5 2007, 15:39:43 UTC

Thank you for such kind feedback. Verbal communication certainly wasn't good was it? But then when one person refuses to vocalize it and the other refuses to see rather than hear it *sigh*

jans_intentions August 4 2007, 23:48:41 UTC

I like that. They want each other but choose not to communicate. Mainly Brian. Great stuff.

sannea August 5 2007, 15:40:32 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it :-)

snowmore August 4 2007, 23:58:41 UTC

These few words capture a distinct problematic issue in their relationship. It was so hard to watch sometimes and this piece reminded me of those tough times.

Thank you for sharing.

sannea August 5 2007, 15:42:09 UTC

Thank you for commenting so generously on it :-)
Yes I always thought it was quite painful to watch them go at their tug-of-war where one always seems to be trying to pull just when the other decides to push and as a result neither of them getting anywhere.

qqqq2046 August 5 2007, 16:44:12 UTC

WOW~ you definitely shot me by this powerful angst~~~~~

"who is holding the gun."oh~~*melt*

sannea August 6 2007, 15:06:24 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback :-)