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Everything at Once-Chapter 20-Revelation--Brian/Justin POV-NC-17

Apr 06, 2005 19:33

Title: Everything at Once-Chapter 20-Revelation--Brian/Justin POV-NC-17
Disclaimer: These characters belong to Shotime/Cowlip.
Appreciation: kinneytay,vedaprophet, and triciaqaf beta'd for me this run. Much ♥ to msjudi because laughing with her is like smoking Temmett! ;-)
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plumsuede April 7 2005, 20:20:00 UTC

//I was sooo gone right here:

...the grip of his snug little ass...

Every once in a while a fic writer uses a phrase that just absolutely kills me and this one gets added to the list.//

Thank you, Cat. That particular phrase was one of the last ones I settled on for some reason. Guess I got it right. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter.

u2_grrrl April 6 2005, 19:19:47 UTC

The dream sequence was heartbreaking, almost too painful to read ( ... )

plumsuede April 7 2005, 20:21:14 UTC

I find it astounding that you enjoyed the sex in this story! You? No way!!!!
;-) thank you!!!!! Your feedback is wonderful! xxoxox

u2_grrrl April 7 2005, 20:33:14 UTC

Aw, who you kidding? I'm convinced you write the sex especially for ME, it's so perfect! Just flawless.

plumsuede April 8 2005, 12:41:57 UTC

It's true. I do.

It's true. She does.

Who said that?

luciblue April 6 2005, 19:39:21 UTC

Holy.Fuck.
This is one gorgeous piece of fiction.

plumsuede April 7 2005, 20:21:40 UTC

//Holy.Fuck.
This is one gorgeous piece of fiction.//

Wow. Thank you! xoxo

vedaprophet April 6 2005, 19:50:40 UTC

brilliant. that is all.

plumsuede April 7 2005, 20:22:05 UTC

brief. that is all.

♥

This is fabulous darling - fabulous luceononuro April 6 2005, 19:50:56 UTC

Plum
I know you write this in long-hand first which fascinates me for some strange reason - perhaps because I have visions of you writing this desperately sexy story out in public spots. So tell me does smoke come off your hair when you are scribbling away? Do other patrons in the coffee shop around you spontaneously combust? Have you ever had to wring out the pages because fire extinguishers were required? An enquiring mind needs to know.

As always, you have delivered a perfectly rendered and stunningly wonderful story.

Thanks

Re: This is fabulous darling - fabulous plumsuede April 7 2005, 20:26:52 UTC

//I know you write this in long-hand first which fascinates me for some strange reason - perhaps because I have visions of you writing this desperately sexy story out in public spots. So tell me does smoke come off your hair when you are scribbling away? Do other patrons in the coffee shop around you spontaneously combust? Have you ever had to wring out the pages because fire extinguishers were required? An enquiring mind needs to know ( ... )