Beyond the Yellow Brick Road-Chapter 47-Illumination

Feb 02, 2013 16:26

Go back to Beyond the Yellow Brick Road-Chapter 46-Establishment If you're just joining the fandom or starting this story, you can start this crazy ride here: Embark, Framed, Beyond the Yellow Brick Road

A/N: Hi, everyone! In the previous chapter, I indicated that this would be the finale chapter, but, alas, I was wrong.  After mulling this ( Read more... )

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dean1955 February 6 2013, 06:51:56 UTC
What a gem of a chapter. I can see why it could not serve as the finale. Then again, I never want there to be a finale ( ... )

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plumsuede February 8 2013, 13:36:31 UTC
Thanks for this feedback. I had NO idea about Anderson's food issues. That's hilarious!! It cracks me up when I hit an accidental kernel of truth. How funny!

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anno53 February 8 2013, 13:04:40 UTC
I'm so glad you are continuing your epic! I've missed these characters. I love your writing style. Just the little nuances, like :
"Amelia closed her eyes, pinching her toes around the edge of the pool and counted". Everything is so well written.

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plumsuede February 8 2013, 13:37:31 UTC
Thanks so much! I love that scene with Amelia. I can feel her nervousness and eventual elation. :)

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drgaellon March 12 2013, 04:45:50 UTC
I've only just discovered this story, and I'm glad I jumped into it when you're nearly done (I hate WIPs, and if I'd started reading five years ago, I'd have long since given up on you). You're a hell of a writer. It's been nice visiting these characters again.

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plumsuede June 24 2013, 17:24:54 UTC
sorry for the late response. Thanks so much for your feedback!!! Truly!

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